Eye
to
eye
I lay across
my mirror lake.
For this
beauty belongs
with my snowflake.
Tears disappear
from evergreen
during my wake.
Dismantle my
idyllic thoughts
as I almost break.
For I see
my bluebird fly
to the sun
for its first daybreak.
To drown
in lone waters
I fall as I awake.
He who sees
my moonlight
from far beholds
my edge of lifeβ¦As my mistake.
Follow me on my next channels and have a delight follow;
Do you want to βHelp a brother & Charity out?”
I, Jojo Al-waealy, The creator of βJJ-Stacheβ welcomes you to my blog! Do you want to help me and charity out? Well, You are in luck, Because I have started the following promo. βHelp a brother & charity out*β. With this, for every sold item, you help me out, but also with a contribution to a charity. I Will donate 10% for every sold item to charity. Once a year I will donate all the donations at once, and YOU will pick out the charity!
With much love & inspiration written by me,


47 responses to “‘Satori,”
β¨
LikeLiked by 5 people
β€οΈππ½
LikeLiked by 4 people
Beautiful Jojo! I have a Japanese friend called Satori. She’ll love your poem.
LikeLiked by 5 people
Thank you so much, filipa. Omg, what a coincidence π I loved the word so much, and now I love it as a name as well!!
LikeLiked by 4 people
I have two japanese friends. One is Satomi and the other one is Satori. Each japanese name has a specific meaning. I think Satori comes from the Buddhism. Would you mind if I send her your poem?
LikeLiked by 2 people
Interesting π³ and ofcourse, you can send my poem. I Feel honoured βΊοΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you Jojo! Take care.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You too, Filipa! ππ½
LikeLiked by 1 person
β€οΈβ¨πΉπ
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, Carla ππ½βΊοΈβ€οΈ
LikeLike
Always πβ€οΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful and powerful. The imagery you created here so vivid.
LikeLiked by 3 people
‘Thank you so much, brockelman. I always appreciate your time and support βΊοΈ
LikeLike
ππ
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much, Lokesh ππ½βΊοΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
This one is little different from your other work.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great eye, Lokesh. Funny that you noticed it, I did indeed try to do something different. Because, what is poetry if we don’t play with words, right?
LikeLiked by 2 people
Don’t you think when we try something new, we open more opportunities for us?
LikeLiked by 2 people
I don’t only think that, I know it for sure.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Keep it up ππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Lokesh. You too ππ½βΊοΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you so much for your time to read my work, therealme! I’m glad you liked it!βΊοΈ
LikeLike
Hi dear Satori, what a beautiful way to finish it – “my edge of lifeβ¦As my mistake.” β€οΈβπ₯
Hope you are doing great.
LikeLiked by 3 people
Hi nebulaa, how have you been doing? I’m doing fine βΊοΈ I’m glad you liked the ending, wasn’t really sure if it was the great way to end like that. So, thank you for confirming that you liked it! β€οΈππ½ Take care of yourself!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Jojooo ππ½ππ½ππ½, lately I’ve been busy realising that being a grown up is a difficult (daunting) task! “Dismantle my idyllic thoughts as I almost break.” I so wish that I was the blue bird. βΊοΈ You too take care vriend.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha ohhw, I totally get you, nebula. It has it’s perks, but sometimes I wish I could be a “blue bird” as well π hihihih I Will Take care, Han βΊοΈ
LikeLiked by 1 person
[…] βSatori, […]
LikeLiked by 3 people
Succha beautiful poem it is.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, Pruuu β€οΈπππ½
LikeLiked by 2 people
Very nicely put and as always very rhyming.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hihihih thank you very much, Arryβ€οΈπ
LikeLiked by 2 people
It’s Aparna !! Jojo
LikeLiked by 2 people
Omg, I’m so sorry! Aparna. Totally my mistake. Forgive me please ππ½π
LikeLike
No probs π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahahaha goodπ I don’t know if I told you before, but sometimes I’m just terrible with namesπ even with my Best friends it takes 3 times before I say the right name, and don’t ask me why I’m like thatπ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ohkay…never knew that !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Omg !!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha yeah, I think the problem is that my mind works to fast for my hand and lips as they can’t catch up with meππ anyway, I’m honoured to know that you liked my work ππ½
LikeLiked by 2 people
Lol…that’s hilarious but cute too. Your welcome jojo
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hihihih, as I always I’m not cute, I’m cool (says it with a cute voice and look)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awwwww
LikeLiked by 1 person
Btw I just showed ur this poem to my brother and he really liked it too
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ohww woow, seriously. Such an honour! Blessed, can you say thanks from meπ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sure I will convey it to him, actually he isn’t interested in poetry much but really liked the rhythm of urs
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Aparna!!!! *Speechless* that means a bunch to me ππ½ππ½(does Little happy danceπΊπΊ)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome again jojo
LikeLike