Eye
to
eye
I lay across
my mirror lake.
For this
beauty belongs
with my snowflake.
Tears disappear
from evergreen
during my wake.
Dismantle my
idyllic thoughts
as I almost break.
For I see
my bluebird fly
to the sun
for its first daybreak.
To drown
in lone waters
I fall as I awake.
He who sees
my moonlight
from far beholds
my edge of life…As my mistake.
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47 responses to “‘Satori,”
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Beautiful Jojo! I have a Japanese friend called Satori. She’ll love your poem.
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Thank you so much, filipa. Omg, what a coincidence 🙈 I loved the word so much, and now I love it as a name as well!!
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I have two japanese friends. One is Satomi and the other one is Satori. Each japanese name has a specific meaning. I think Satori comes from the Buddhism. Would you mind if I send her your poem?
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Interesting 😳 and ofcourse, you can send my poem. I Feel honoured ☺️
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Thank you Jojo! Take care.
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You too, Filipa! 🙏🏽
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❤️✨🌹💖
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Thank you so much, Carla 🙏🏽☺️❤️
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Always 😊❤️
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Beautiful and powerful. The imagery you created here so vivid.
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‘Thank you so much, brockelman. I always appreciate your time and support ☺️
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Thank you so much, Lokesh 🙏🏽☺️
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This one is little different from your other work.
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Great eye, Lokesh. Funny that you noticed it, I did indeed try to do something different. Because, what is poetry if we don’t play with words, right?
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Don’t you think when we try something new, we open more opportunities for us?
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I don’t only think that, I know it for sure.
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Keep it up 👍👍
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Thanks, Lokesh. You too 🙏🏽☺️
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Wow!
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Thank you so much for your time to read my work, therealme! I’m glad you liked it!☺️
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Hi dear Satori, what a beautiful way to finish it – “my edge of life…As my mistake.” ❤️🔥
Hope you are doing great.
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Hi nebulaa, how have you been doing? I’m doing fine ☺️ I’m glad you liked the ending, wasn’t really sure if it was the great way to end like that. So, thank you for confirming that you liked it! ❤️🙏🏽 Take care of yourself!!
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Jojooo 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽, lately I’ve been busy realising that being a grown up is a difficult (daunting) task! “Dismantle my idyllic thoughts as I almost break.” I so wish that I was the blue bird. ☺️ You too take care vriend.
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Hahaha ohhw, I totally get you, nebula. It has it’s perks, but sometimes I wish I could be a “blue bird” as well 🙈 hihihih I Will Take care, Han ☺️
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Succha beautiful poem it is.
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Thank you so much, Pruuu ❤️😊🙏🏽
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Very nicely put and as always very rhyming.
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Hihihih thank you very much, Arry❤️😊
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It’s Aparna !! Jojo
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Omg, I’m so sorry! Aparna. Totally my mistake. Forgive me please 🙏🏽🙈
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No probs 😂
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Hahahaha good😂 I don’t know if I told you before, but sometimes I’m just terrible with names😂 even with my Best friends it takes 3 times before I say the right name, and don’t ask me why I’m like that😂
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Ohkay…never knew that !
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Omg !!
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Hahaha yeah, I think the problem is that my mind works to fast for my hand and lips as they can’t catch up with me😂🙈 anyway, I’m honoured to know that you liked my work 🙏🏽
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Lol…that’s hilarious but cute too. Your welcome jojo
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Hihihih, as I always I’m not cute, I’m cool (says it with a cute voice and look)
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Awwwww
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Btw I just showed ur this poem to my brother and he really liked it too
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Ohww woow, seriously. Such an honour! Blessed, can you say thanks from me😊
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Sure I will convey it to him, actually he isn’t interested in poetry much but really liked the rhythm of urs
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Thank you, Aparna!!!! *Speechless* that means a bunch to me 🙏🏽🙏🏽(does Little happy dance🕺🕺)
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Welcome again jojo
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