Eye
to
eye
I lay across
my mirror lake.
For this
beauty belongs
with my snowflake.
Tears disappear
from evergreen
during my wake.
Dismantle my
idyllic thoughts
as I almost break.
For I see
my bluebird fly
to the sun
for its first daybreak.
To drown
in lone waters
I fall as I awake.
He who sees
my moonlight
from far beholds
my edge of lifeโฆAs my mistake.
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47 responses to “‘Satori,”
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Beautiful Jojo! I have a Japanese friend called Satori. She’ll love your poem.
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Thank you so much, filipa. Omg, what a coincidence ๐ I loved the word so much, and now I love it as a name as well!!
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I have two japanese friends. One is Satomi and the other one is Satori. Each japanese name has a specific meaning. I think Satori comes from the Buddhism. Would you mind if I send her your poem?
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Interesting ๐ณ and ofcourse, you can send my poem. I Feel honoured โบ๏ธ
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Thank you Jojo! Take care.
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You too, Filipa! ๐๐ฝ
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โค๏ธโจ๐น๐
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Thank you so much, Carla ๐๐ฝโบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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Always ๐โค๏ธ
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Beautiful and powerful. The imagery you created here so vivid.
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‘Thank you so much, brockelman. I always appreciate your time and support โบ๏ธ
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Thank you so much, Lokesh ๐๐ฝโบ๏ธ
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This one is little different from your other work.
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Great eye, Lokesh. Funny that you noticed it, I did indeed try to do something different. Because, what is poetry if we don’t play with words, right?
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Don’t you think when we try something new, we open more opportunities for us?
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I don’t only think that, I know it for sure.
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Keep it up ๐๐
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Thanks, Lokesh. You too ๐๐ฝโบ๏ธ
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Wow!
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Thank you so much for your time to read my work, therealme! I’m glad you liked it!โบ๏ธ
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Hi dear Satori, what a beautiful way to finish it – “my edge of lifeโฆAs my mistake.” โค๏ธโ๐ฅ
Hope you are doing great.
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Hi nebulaa, how have you been doing? I’m doing fine โบ๏ธ I’m glad you liked the ending, wasn’t really sure if it was the great way to end like that. So, thank you for confirming that you liked it! โค๏ธ๐๐ฝ Take care of yourself!!
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Jojooo ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ, lately I’ve been busy realising that being a grown up is a difficult (daunting) task! “Dismantle my idyllic thoughts as I almost break.” I so wish that I was the blue bird. โบ๏ธ You too take care vriend.
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Hahaha ohhw, I totally get you, nebula. It has it’s perks, but sometimes I wish I could be a “blue bird” as well ๐ hihihih I Will Take care, Han โบ๏ธ
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Succha beautiful poem it is.
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Thank you so much, Pruuu โค๏ธ๐๐๐ฝ
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Very nicely put and as always very rhyming.
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Hihihih thank you very much, Arryโค๏ธ๐
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It’s Aparna !! Jojo
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Omg, I’m so sorry! Aparna. Totally my mistake. Forgive me please ๐๐ฝ๐
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No probs ๐
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Hahahaha good๐ I don’t know if I told you before, but sometimes I’m just terrible with names๐ even with my Best friends it takes 3 times before I say the right name, and don’t ask me why I’m like that๐
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Ohkay…never knew that !
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Omg !!
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Hahaha yeah, I think the problem is that my mind works to fast for my hand and lips as they can’t catch up with me๐๐ anyway, I’m honoured to know that you liked my work ๐๐ฝ
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Lol…that’s hilarious but cute too. Your welcome jojo
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Hihihih, as I always I’m not cute, I’m cool (says it with a cute voice and look)
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Awwwww
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Btw I just showed ur this poem to my brother and he really liked it too
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Ohww woow, seriously. Such an honour! Blessed, can you say thanks from me๐
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Sure I will convey it to him, actually he isn’t interested in poetry much but really liked the rhythm of urs
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Thank you, Aparna!!!! *Speechless* that means a bunch to me ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ(does Little happy dance๐บ๐บ)
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Welcome again jojo
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