Be my mistake,
as I would rather be alone.
From a story I had to believe
I took my heart for you to own.
What am I to you?
Whom could I be if not shown?
I Have my heart rising,
my soul denying, to a world from the unknown.
Be my love,
As I collapse below the crystal skies.
To only whisper beyond recognition
I have to believe your eyes.
To the angels and demons,
they hear my sadness in my lies.
A Light approaches my sight
for I pray my wishes for the wise.
βBe my endless hope,
because I am not ready to elope.β
Promise me now, in the end of time
my hands will not touch your rope. Β
These words keep me safe now
to write down in my envelope.
Follow me on my next channels and have a delight follow;
Do you want to βHelp a brother outβ please check out the next link; βJJ-stacheβ As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,


36 responses to “‘The untold truth,”
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Good work Jo!
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Thank you so much, nawazich β€οΈππ½
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My pleasureπ
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I love the depth of this poem… keep on the amazing work my friend
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Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it βΊοΈβ€οΈ I’m glad you liked my work and I will definitely do that! Thanks for the support!!
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Anytime this work touches the lives of people more than you can imagine so giving you support is the least I can do
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Really blessed! Speechless and flabbergasted by your kind and loving words β€οΈππ½
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Beautiful jj… Much depth in each line. Your words are touching and deeply moving. A really wonderful poem once again ππΉβ€οΈ
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Aahww thank you so much, Amirah β€οΈ I’m glad you liked it once again βΊοΈ always doing my best π€
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Wow, this is so moving! Each line resonates so well with the reader, thank you for blessing us with this masterpiece π
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Aahww Hannah, Thank you so much β€οΈβ€οΈ really appreciate your comment! I Hope you have been doing well? Long time no see and speak!
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Youβre most welcome, I always enjoy reading your work πβ€οΈ I have been very good thank you, just work has been busy so I go on here, but not as much as I used to. How have you been, I hope that you are keeping well π
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Hihihih Thank you, dear. That’s great, Hannah. Totally get it though, just glad all is well with you βΊοΈ I have been good as well, busy as too, but the good kind busy. Can’t complain βΊοΈ Thanks for asking β€οΈππ½
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Ahh thatβs good, sounds like there are some good things in store for you! I love how positive you are, I wish you all of the best ππ
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Brilliant πππ€
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Thank you so much, truly appreciate it π€β€οΈππ½
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You’re more than welcome my friend π€
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The first line made me nostalgic as it reminded me of the song βBe My Mistakeβ by The 1975 . One of my absolute favourites. Also, absolutely love this poem. Thank you so much for your kind support by liking my post, Jojo. Iβm a new blogger. Started just three days back. Followed you. If you want you can have a look at my other posts as well. Would love to stay connected. Cheers.ππ»
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Ahhww thank you so much, atrija, glad you loved it!!βΊοΈ Welcome to the club. I Will check out your page. Always my pleasure!β€οΈβΊοΈ
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Appreciate your kindness, Jojo! Hope youβll enjoy reading the posts. Together, upwards and onwards!ππ»ππ»
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Ofcourse Always my pleasure, I always say; ” One community one goal, to write and inspire.” ππ½βΊοΈβ€οΈ
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Absolutely. Couldnβt have agreed more.π
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πOπMπGπ So beautiful Jojo. Sigh…
Be my mistake, be my love, be my endless hope
I took my heart for you to own
And what am I to you?
As the smile dancing on my lips dies
Hear my sadness in my lies
That envelope is quite lucky to shelter those beautiful words. Loved it….so much….
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Omg, nebula you made me blush. Goshh, I know I can’t say “thank you”, but really thank you so muchβ€οΈ you always inspire me to write, and to share my work. – that envelope is lucky indeed. Ik bedank je met heel mijn hart β€οΈππ½π
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It is always my pleasure, vriend πβ€οΈπ
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Blessed ππ½β€οΈπ€
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‘Thank you so much βΊοΈβΊοΈππ½ππ½β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Sheri βΊοΈππ½β€οΈ
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Easy to grasp yet fascinating π
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Thank you so much βΊοΈ truly appreciate your time to read my work!ππ½β€οΈ
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Beautiful!! I wish I could you know propose anyone with your this poem haha well I won’t do just kidding but it’s too much lovely!! β€
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Hahahaha, well maybe you could ππ³ no, just kidding. I’m glad you loved it π₯°
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