Be my mistake,
as I would rather be alone.
From a story I had to believe
I took my heart for you to own.
What am I to you?
Whom could I be if not shown?
I Have my heart rising,
my soul denying, to a world from the unknown.
Be my love,
As I collapse below the crystal skies.
To only whisper beyond recognition
I have to believe your eyes.
To the angels and demons,
they hear my sadness in my lies.
A Light approaches my sight
for I pray my wishes for the wise.
“Be my endless hope,
because I am not ready to elope.”
Promise me now, in the end of time
my hands will not touch your rope.
These words keep me safe now
to write down in my envelope.
Follow me on my next channels and have a delight follow;
Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,
36 responses to “‘The untold truth,”
Superb👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙏🏻❤️
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Good work Jo!
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Thank you so much, nawazich ❤️🙏🏽
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My pleasure😀
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I love the depth of this poem… keep on the amazing work my friend
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Thank you so much, I truly appreciate it ☺️❤️ I’m glad you liked my work and I will definitely do that! Thanks for the support!!
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Anytime this work touches the lives of people more than you can imagine so giving you support is the least I can do
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Really blessed! Speechless and flabbergasted by your kind and loving words ❤️🙏🏽
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Beautiful jj… Much depth in each line. Your words are touching and deeply moving. A really wonderful poem once again 😊🌹❤️
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Aahww thank you so much, Amirah ❤️ I’m glad you liked it once again ☺️ always doing my best 🤗
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Wow, this is so moving! Each line resonates so well with the reader, thank you for blessing us with this masterpiece 🙂
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Aahww Hannah, Thank you so much ❤️❤️ really appreciate your comment! I Hope you have been doing well? Long time no see and speak!
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You’re most welcome, I always enjoy reading your work 🙂❤️ I have been very good thank you, just work has been busy so I go on here, but not as much as I used to. How have you been, I hope that you are keeping well 🙂
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Hihihih Thank you, dear. That’s great, Hannah. Totally get it though, just glad all is well with you ☺️ I have been good as well, busy as too, but the good kind busy. Can’t complain ☺️ Thanks for asking ❤️🙏🏽
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Ahh that’s good, sounds like there are some good things in store for you! I love how positive you are, I wish you all of the best 💕💕
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Brilliant 👍👍🖤
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Thank you so much, truly appreciate it 🤭❤️🙏🏽
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You’re more than welcome my friend 🖤
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☺️🙏🏽❤️
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The first line made me nostalgic as it reminded me of the song “Be My Mistake” by The 1975 . One of my absolute favourites. Also, absolutely love this poem. Thank you so much for your kind support by liking my post, Jojo. I’m a new blogger. Started just three days back. Followed you. If you want you can have a look at my other posts as well. Would love to stay connected. Cheers.😇🌻
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Ahhww thank you so much, atrija, glad you loved it!!☺️ Welcome to the club. I Will check out your page. Always my pleasure!❤️☺️
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Appreciate your kindness, Jojo! Hope you’ll enjoy reading the posts. Together, upwards and onwards!🙏🏻😇🌻
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Ofcourse Always my pleasure, I always say; ” One community one goal, to write and inspire.” 🙏🏽☺️❤️
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Absolutely. Couldn’t have agreed more.😇
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💘O💘M💘G💘 So beautiful Jojo. Sigh…
Be my mistake, be my love, be my endless hope
I took my heart for you to own
And what am I to you?
As the smile dancing on my lips dies
Hear my sadness in my lies
That envelope is quite lucky to shelter those beautiful words. Loved it….so much….
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Omg, nebula you made me blush. Goshh, I know I can’t say “thank you”, but really thank you so much❤️ you always inspire me to write, and to share my work. – that envelope is lucky indeed. Ik bedank je met heel mijn hart ❤️🙏🏽😜
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It is always my pleasure, vriend 💛❤️💜
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Blessed 🙏🏽❤️🤗
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😍😍😍👏 👏 👏
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‘Thank you so much ☺️☺️🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️❤️
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Beautiful.
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Thank you so much, Sheri ☺️🙏🏽❤️
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Easy to grasp yet fascinating 👏
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Thank you so much ☺️ truly appreciate your time to read my work!🙏🏽❤️
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Beautiful!! I wish I could you know propose anyone with your this poem haha well I won’t do just kidding but it’s too much lovely!! ❤
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Hahahaha, well maybe you could 👀😳 no, just kidding. I’m glad you loved it 🥰
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