‘The untold truth,

Be my mistake,

as I would rather be alone.

From a story I had to believe

I took my heart for you to own.

What am I to you?

Whom could I be if not shown?

I Have my heart rising,

my soul denying, to a world from the unknown.

Be my love,

As I collapse below the crystal skies.

To only whisper beyond recognition

I have to believe your eyes.

To the angels and demons,

they hear my sadness in my lies.

A Light approaches my sight

for I pray my wishes for the wise.

“Be my endless hope,

because I am not ready to elope.”

Promise me now, in the end of time

my hands will not touch your rope.  

These words keep me safe now

to write down in my envelope.


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With much love & inspiration written by me,

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34 thoughts on “‘The untold truth,

  1. silent poetry says:

    Beautiful jj… Much depth in each line. Your words are touching and deeply moving. A really wonderful poem once again 😊🌹❤️

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      1. Hannah Gandhi says:

        You’re most welcome, I always enjoy reading your work 🙂❤️ I have been very good thank you, just work has been busy so I go on here, but not as much as I used to. How have you been, I hope that you are keeping well 🙂

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      2. jojo alwaealy says:

        Hihihih Thank you, dear. That’s great, Hannah. Totally get it though, just glad all is well with you ☺️ I have been good as well, busy as too, but the good kind busy. Can’t complain ☺️ Thanks for asking ❤️🙏🏽

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      3. Hannah Gandhi says:

        Ahh that’s good, sounds like there are some good things in store for you! I love how positive you are, I wish you all of the best 💕💕

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  2. Atrija says:

    The first line made me nostalgic as it reminded me of the song “Be My Mistake” by The 1975 . One of my absolute favourites. Also, absolutely love this poem. Thank you so much for your kind support by liking my post, Jojo. I’m a new blogger. Started just three days back. Followed you. If you want you can have a look at my other posts as well. Would love to stay connected. Cheers.😇🌻

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  3. Shooting Nebula says:

    💘O💘M💘G💘 So beautiful Jojo. Sigh…
    Be my mistake, be my love, be my endless hope
    I took my heart for you to own
    And what am I to you?
    As the smile dancing on my lips dies
    Hear my sadness in my lies
    That envelope is quite lucky to shelter those beautiful words. Loved it….so much….

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    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Omg, nebula you made me blush. Goshh, I know I can’t say “thank you”, but really thank you so much❤️ you always inspire me to write, and to share my work. – that envelope is lucky indeed. Ik bedank je met heel mijn hart ❤️🙏🏽😜

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