‘Oh hear the river stream
down my path. I Left prints
behind to be fraught in fears.
Let me remember you my
only thought that belong.
From rain to tears you hear
my music of the spheres.
I was the fallen,
in the hearts of darkness,
whom bellowed my coarse in stone.
One confession away from
being a misfit. All by my own.
“Not of this world.” This
resembles my own throne.
Let me be the water
in your ocean, as I will
follow you to the end.
Farewell, my world,
to as I have one amend.
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15 responses to “‘Amend,”
Lovely poem 👌👌👌
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Thank you so much, Carla 🤭 truly appreciate your time to read my work ☺️🙏🏽❤️
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Oh I read it, but today I wanted to comment, you have a lovely blog 👌❤️😊
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Ahww, that means a bunch to me!! Grateful and blessed ☺️🙏🏽❤️
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You are most welcome, my pleasure 🙏🌹❤️
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So beautiful…. Deep lines, touching hearts. Beautifully crafted jj 🙂🌹
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Hihihih thank you so much, A!! ☺️❤️🙏🏽 Glad you liked it!!
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Powerful
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‘Thank you so much, Rhiannon ☺️🙏🏽
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So deep, beautiful and touching! Great work Jojo! ❤
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Thank you so much, K☺️🤭❤️ glad you liked it!! I Hope you have been doing great?
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Really enjoyed it!
I’m building a Facebook page, “Found Online,” where I can link to poems I really enjoy for others to explore. This poem is one I chose to link to. Check out the page at: https://www.facebook.com/joestoutfoundonline
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Thank you so much ❤️❤️ Truly appreciate your support 🤭🙏🏽🙏🏽
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” Let me remember you my
only thought that belong.”
” Let me be the water
in your ocean, as I will
follow you to the end.”
These lines killed me you poet sir!!!!!! ❤
WONDERFUL POEM!!!!
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Thank you so much, dearest Pruuu ❤️🙏🏽
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