‘The untold truth,

Be my mistake,

as I would rather be alone.

From a story I had to believe

I took my heart for you to own.

What am I to you?

Whom could I be if not shown?

I Have my heart rising,

my soul denying, to a world from the unknown.

Be my love,

As I collapse below the crystal skies.

To only whisper beyond recognition

I have to believe your eyes.

To the angels and demons,

they hear my sadness in my lies.

A Light approaches my sight

for I pray my wishes for the wise.

β€œBe my endless hope,

because I am not ready to elope.”

Promise me now, in the end of time

my hands will not touch your rope. Β 

These words keep me safe now

to write down in my envelope.


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36 responses to “‘The untold truth,”

  1. Beautiful jj… Much depth in each line. Your words are touching and deeply moving. A really wonderful poem once again 😊🌹❀️

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      • You’re most welcome, I always enjoy reading your work πŸ™‚β€οΈ I have been very good thank you, just work has been busy so I go on here, but not as much as I used to. How have you been, I hope that you are keeping well πŸ™‚

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      • Hihihih Thank you, dear. That’s great, Hannah. Totally get it though, just glad all is well with you ☺️ I have been good as well, busy as too, but the good kind busy. Can’t complain ☺️ Thanks for asking β€οΈπŸ™πŸ½

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  2. The first line made me nostalgic as it reminded me of the song β€œBe My Mistake” by The 1975 . One of my absolute favourites. Also, absolutely love this poem. Thank you so much for your kind support by liking my post, Jojo. I’m a new blogger. Started just three days back. Followed you. If you want you can have a look at my other posts as well. Would love to stay connected. Cheers.πŸ˜‡πŸŒ»

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  3. πŸ’˜OπŸ’˜MπŸ’˜GπŸ’˜ So beautiful Jojo. Sigh…
    Be my mistake, be my love, be my endless hope
    I took my heart for you to own
    And what am I to you?
    As the smile dancing on my lips dies
    Hear my sadness in my lies
    That envelope is quite lucky to shelter those beautiful words. Loved it….so much….

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  4. Beautiful!! I wish I could you know propose anyone with your this poem haha well I won’t do just kidding but it’s too much lovely!! ❀

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