To bloom like thorns
of roses I speak with.
Do feel my pain with each touch
as I remember the waves holding me strong.
I Am, as they say; “A Myth.”
To linger with words
I speak of no falls.
Do try,
do hold,
do not do as told.
To as I am….. cold.
Cut me down
as fingers bleed from torment.
I Am blooming with the thoughts
of being one with allure.
I Reach out for thee
As they see not beauty in me.
(A rose.
A thorn.)
Fingers bleed
no more.
Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,
Your work just keeps getting more and more refined. You focus and wordplay becomes clearer with each poem you write. This phrase is so on balance:
As they see not beauty in me.
(A rose.
A thorn.)
Fingers bleed
no more.
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Hi Brockelman,
Thanks you so much for saying that. I truly appreciate it! Such an amazing compliment🤗❤️🙏🏽 I do my best and I have fun doing so! I’m glad you loved it!!❤️
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fantastic verse.
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Thank you so much, grumpygorman!!😊🙏🏽 Truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️
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Wow jojo this is captivating ❤️…. Very beautiful words, really love every line. Great piece, thanks for sharing your wonderful mind ❤️😊🌹
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Seriously, I Thank you a thousand times, A❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 glad you loved it so much. Always my pleasure to share my work!! ❤️❤️
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Your very welcome 🌹😊
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❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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I dive deep in these words as I keep reading! So full of emotions. Just beautiful ❤️
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Sonali, thank you so much ❤️❤️ I’m glad you loved it! Truly appreciate it ❤️🙏🏽
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You’re welcome 💕
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❤️🙏🏽
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I really enjoyed the poem. It really describes the idea of the beauty and the thorns represented so visually by a rose. Being one with allure is such a powerful and evocative image.
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Hi Adriana, Thank you so much for reading my work!❤️ I’m glad you enjoyed my poem! Truly appreciate it😊 and yes, the rose does that indeed. Such a simple but yet powerful flower it can be.
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Beautifully written! I love seeing such depth with equally as much open ended nature within a piece that the reader becomes a co-creator within the poems written! What an inspiration!
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Oh woow, Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it so much 😊 truly appreciate your feedback, and time to read my work 🙏🏽❤️ I do my best 😊
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This is so touching. I picture even a tree but it is not the same symbolism.
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Thank you so much, beachah!! I’m glad you liked it! To be touching for you❤️ I understand why you would picture a tree in it. It is the way you want to look at it, the way you want to feel it and to be one with it. 😊🙏🏽❤️ I Hope you are doing well?
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You’re welcome Jojo! As everything in writing, everyone sees it their own way. ❤️ Ehh, I’m ok.. this year’s hard. I hope you’re ok too? Cheerio 🤗 Béa
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That’s true, Béa😊🙏🏽 such a long lovely name, though 😊 same here, a hard year, but also a year of many accomplishments. I’m fine , no health issues or anything!! Cheers ❤️🤗
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Thank you. Congrats for the accomplishments!
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🙏🏽❤️
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Thrilling one in a beautiful words!
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Well, milady!! Thank you so much ☺️
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