To bloom like thorns
of roses I speak with.
Do feel my pain with each touch
as I remember the waves holding me strong.
I Am, as they say; “A Myth.”
To linger with words
I speak of no falls.
Do try,
do hold,
do not do as told.
To as I am….. cold.
Cut me down
as fingers bleed from torment.
I Am blooming with the thoughts
of being one with allure.
I Reach out for thee
As they see not beauty in me.
(A rose.
A thorn.)
Fingers bleed
no more.
Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,
JJ-stache 
24 responses to “‘bloom,”
Your work just keeps getting more and more refined. You focus and wordplay becomes clearer with each poem you write. This phrase is so on balance:
As they see not beauty in me.
(A rose.
A thorn.)
Fingers bleed
no more.
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Hi Brockelman,
Thanks you so much for saying that. I truly appreciate it! Such an amazing compliment🤗❤️🙏🏽 I do my best and I have fun doing so! I’m glad you loved it!!❤️
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fantastic verse.
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Thank you so much, grumpygorman!!😊🙏🏽 Truly appreciate your time to read my work ❤️
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Wow jojo this is captivating ❤️…. Very beautiful words, really love every line. Great piece, thanks for sharing your wonderful mind ❤️😊🌹
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Seriously, I Thank you a thousand times, A❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 glad you loved it so much. Always my pleasure to share my work!! ❤️❤️
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Your very welcome 🌹😊
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❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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I dive deep in these words as I keep reading! So full of emotions. Just beautiful ❤️
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Sonali, thank you so much ❤️❤️ I’m glad you loved it! Truly appreciate it ❤️🙏🏽
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You’re welcome 💕
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❤️🙏🏽
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I really enjoyed the poem. It really describes the idea of the beauty and the thorns represented so visually by a rose. Being one with allure is such a powerful and evocative image.
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Hi Adriana, Thank you so much for reading my work!❤️ I’m glad you enjoyed my poem! Truly appreciate it😊 and yes, the rose does that indeed. Such a simple but yet powerful flower it can be.
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Beautifully written! I love seeing such depth with equally as much open ended nature within a piece that the reader becomes a co-creator within the poems written! What an inspiration!
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Oh woow, Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it so much 😊 truly appreciate your feedback, and time to read my work 🙏🏽❤️ I do my best 😊
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This is so touching. I picture even a tree but it is not the same symbolism.
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Thank you so much, beachah!! I’m glad you liked it! To be touching for you❤️ I understand why you would picture a tree in it. It is the way you want to look at it, the way you want to feel it and to be one with it. 😊🙏🏽❤️ I Hope you are doing well?
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You’re welcome Jojo! As everything in writing, everyone sees it their own way. ❤️ Ehh, I’m ok.. this year’s hard. I hope you’re ok too? Cheerio 🤗 Béa
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That’s true, Béa😊🙏🏽 such a long lovely name, though 😊 same here, a hard year, but also a year of many accomplishments. I’m fine , no health issues or anything!! Cheers ❤️🤗
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Thank you. Congrats for the accomplishments!
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🙏🏽❤️
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Thrilling one in a beautiful words!
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Well, milady!! Thank you so much ☺️
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