To bloom like thorns

of roses I speak with.

Do feel my pain with each touch

as I remember the waves holding me strong.

I Am, as they say; “A Myth.”

To linger with words

I speak of no falls.

Do try,

do hold,

do not do as told.

To as I am….. cold.

Cut me down

as fingers bleed from torment.  

I Am blooming with the thoughts

of being one with allure.

I Reach out for thee

As they see not beauty in me.

(A rose.

A thorn.)

Fingers bleed

no more.

Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!

With much love & inspiration written by me,

Stamp of approval

24 responses to “‘bloom,”

  1. Your work just keeps getting more and more refined. You focus and wordplay becomes clearer with each poem you write. This phrase is so on balance:

    As they see not beauty in me.
    (A rose.
    A thorn.)
    Fingers bleed
    no more.

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    • Hi Brockelman,

      Thanks you so much for saying that. I truly appreciate it! Such an amazing compliment🤗❤️🙏🏽 I do my best and I have fun doing so! I’m glad you loved it!!❤️

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  2. Wow jojo this is captivating ❤️…. Very beautiful words, really love every line. Great piece, thanks for sharing your wonderful mind ❤️😊🌹

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    • Hi Adriana, Thank you so much for reading my work!❤️ I’m glad you enjoyed my poem! Truly appreciate it😊 and yes, the rose does that indeed. Such a simple but yet powerful flower it can be.

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  3. Beautifully written! I love seeing such depth with equally as much open ended nature within a piece that the reader becomes a co-creator within the poems written! What an inspiration!

    Liked by 4 people

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