Do not look at me
I wasn’t dreaming.
Do not speak of me
when you started mistreating.
I Am the one with hope,
(do not trust me)
as you eloped. To find beauty
in your words written down
on earths envelope.
Catch not my fall
as I rise with looming stars.
to speak of the past
I share forgotten memoirs.
To commit, in dwell of nights,
you have to show your scars.
Hence; To grief no more
I shall not be sad of the lies.
A Mirror of reflections
beholds the truth in my eyes.
Farewell, lift your grace with one breath
to as I behold my soul with the skies.
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With much love & inspiration written by me,
21 responses to “‘atone,”
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Thank you, thank you so much, Soni ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽😊😊
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Awww wow it’s amazing, much depth here JoJo❤️. Beautifully expressed & written with lovely words that flow wonderfully ❤️🌹😊
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Aahww Thank you so much, A🤭❤️🙈 truly appreciate it! Glad you liked it! Always love your feedback and comments. They are Always beautiful and helpful!!❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Your welcome…. You deserve it. You write wonderfully ❤️
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Hihihih “blushing”❤️❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽 please take care of yourself!!
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I love the commitment to your blog … real inspiration 💃🏼
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Thank you so much!! I truly appreciate that. I Just really have fun doing it, it’s has become an amazing hobby of mine. 😊🙏🏽 And people like you who say things like this inspire me too!!❤️
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Continue the amazing work my friend 🤗
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I shall do, Thanks for the compliment and inspiration!! 😊🤗
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A writing community that stays together is strengthened 😊
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To as I always say; One community One goal. To write and to inspire!🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Niceeee….🤗 I wonder how you come up with all this
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Hahaha Thank you so much!! And haha I don’t know how I could answer that question😳🙈😂
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I can’t recall exactly (I am getting old🐘) which poem but anyway I will better reiterate that I love this rhyme hope and elope. 🙃
“I Am the one with hope, (do not trust me) as you eloped. ”
“you have to show your scars” That’s a tough task. By the way, how many skies do you own? Just kidding, I loved it.
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Ahhaha my dear elephant, you do have a good recall though. I did use it once before in one off my poem. Kinda similar, Little bit different. But good memory, Nebula!
Hahaha this guy has many skies, as there are many galaxies in this universe 😏😳 as you are Nebula in this universe you are Divya as well in a whole different place 😳👀😘 just kidding. Thanks for liking it and reading my work, Little stalker ❤️🙏🏽
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Chilling ❤ ❤ ❤
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Thank you so much, Laura!!😊❤️ Glad you liked it!!
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“I Am the one with hope,
(do not trust me)
as you eloped. To find beauty
in your words written down
on earths envelope.”
Have no words for your writings but would say I LOVE IT AS USUAL I DO!!!
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Hihihih and you have gotten me speechless, comment after comment!!! 😍😳❤️ And I love reading your comment!!
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You deserve it man!!
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