‘atone,

Do not look at me

I wasn’t dreaming.

Do not speak of me

when you started mistreating.

I Am the one with hope,

(do not trust me)

as you eloped. To find beauty

in your words written down

on earths envelope.

Catch not my fall

as I rise with looming stars.

to speak of the past

I share forgotten memoirs.

To commit, in dwell of nights,

you have to show your scars.

Hence; To grief no more

I shall not be sad of the lies.

A Mirror of reflections

beholds the truth in my eyes.

Farewell, lift your grace with one breath

to as I behold my soul with the skies.


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With much love & inspiration written by me,

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21 responses to “‘atone,”

  1. Awww wow it’s amazing, much depth here JoJo❤️. Beautifully expressed & written with lovely words that flow wonderfully ❤️🌹😊

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  2. I can’t recall exactly (I am getting old🐘) which poem but anyway I will better reiterate that I love this rhyme hope and elope. 🙃
    “I Am the one with hope, (do not trust me) as you eloped. ”

    “you have to show your scars” That’s a tough task. By the way, how many skies do you own? Just kidding, I loved it.

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    • Ahhaha my dear elephant, you do have a good recall though. I did use it once before in one off my poem. Kinda similar, Little bit different. But good memory, Nebula!

      Hahaha this guy has many skies, as there are many galaxies in this universe 😏😳 as you are Nebula in this universe you are Divya as well in a whole different place 😳👀😘 just kidding. Thanks for liking it and reading my work, Little stalker ❤️🙏🏽

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  3. “I Am the one with hope,

    (do not trust me)

    as you eloped. To find beauty

    in your words written down

    on earths envelope.”

    Have no words for your writings but would say I LOVE IT AS USUAL I DO!!!

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