In solace in night,
day by day, we speak of what we can.
While shrive me of the sin
we rise easily as we reach out by hand.
Take my promise as I feel my spirit shed
we are no more no less than fall of man.
Waves of the sea, please, speak to me
As I feel the breeze lingering over my ardour.
So late from heaven, that dew, it fell
mid dreams of holy ceremony.
Existence of life, take my tears
as I cried my last matrimony.
In moonshine we see stars upon a history
where the good speaks for the eternal youth.
When the leaves come falling down
we cannot be withheld from the truth.
21 responses to “‘Ardour,”
Wow โค๏ธ…. The whole poem is heartwarmingly beautiful โค๏ธ Although I really find this last part touching, “In moonshine we see stars upon a history where the good speaks for the eternal youth. When the leaves come falling down we cannot be withheld from the truth” what a lovely way to end this amazing moving poem. Loving it, expressed with purity ๐โค๏ธ๐น
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Hihihih aahww REALLY, thank you so much, A!! โค๏ธโค๏ธ I guess you are today’s my lonely and first comment๐๐ณ but you know I truly appreciate that!! I’m Glad you liked it. Especially the Ending ๐๐ฝโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐
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Your welcome…. ๐
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Nice!
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Thank you so much, masercot!!๐๐๐ฝ
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“As I feel the breeze lingering over my ardour.
So late from heaven, that dew, it fell
mid dreams of holy ceremony.”
Woww!!!! Beautiful lines, Jojo. ๐๐
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Liaaa, Thank you so, so much ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝโค๏ธโค๏ธ I’m glad you liked it!! I Hope everything is going well?
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You are very welcome dear Jojo. โค๏ธ All is well, hope it is for you too? ๐๐
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Great, Lia. Good to know all is well with you. Same here though! I have a week off from work at this moment, so I take the time to rest and invest some time into my blog ๐๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
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Ah that’s wonderful. I wonder what job you have. Is it stressful? I’ve just redone my resume. Hugs and have fun. ๐ค๐
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Nothing stressful or anything, I work as an assistant manager in a high end clothing store. Full-time. It’s Just time consuming, and with the whole covid-19 my schedule is pretty much a mess ๐ but, I’m am handling it. No worries about that. Great to know that you still looking for a job. I Hope you ca find anything soon!! ๐โค๏ธ Hugs back๐โค๏ธ
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Well that sounds like kind of fun!! Fashion, love. :))) Yes Covid has made the sitch very different out there in the work world indeed. Thanks for the kind thoughts ๐๐๐
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Haahha it has it’s fun Indeed.๐ Can’t wait when the whole covid-19 is over…. But for now we have to accept it and do the best we can! Always my pleasure, Lia โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ keep it up!
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I enjoyed reading this one! Amazing and beautifully written!
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Hi Sirishty, Thank you so much for reading my work! I’m glad you enjoyed it!! ๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
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It’s my pleasure Jojo๐
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I like the panoramic sweep of these lines infused by true ardor; well done ๐
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Hey John, Thank you so much for your time to read my work! I’m glad you liked it! Truly appreciate it!!๐
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Such a lovely line ๐ “As I feel the breeze lingering over my ardour”
The waves and the breeze would then carry the fragrance of your ardour that you harbor to spread it everywhere ๐
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Hahaha they would, right? ๐ณ๐ Hihihih. You make me blush in silence ๐๐ณ
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