‘Ardour,

In solace in night,

day by day, we speak of what we can.

While shrive me of the sin

we rise easily as we reach out by hand.

Take my promise as I feel my spirit shed

we are no more no less than fall of man.

Waves of the sea, please, speak to me

As I feel the breeze lingering over my ardour.

So late from heaven, that dew, it fell

mid dreams of holy ceremony.

Existence of life, take my tears

as I cried my last matrimony.

In moonshine we see stars upon a history

where the good speaks for the eternal youth.

When the leaves come falling down

we cannot be withheld from the truth.

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21 thoughts on “‘Ardour,”

  1. Wow ❤️…. The whole poem is heartwarmingly beautiful ❤️ Although I really find this last part touching, “In moonshine we see stars upon a history where the good speaks for the eternal youth. When the leaves come falling down we cannot be withheld from the truth” what a lovely way to end this amazing moving poem. Loving it, expressed with purity 😊❤️🌹

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    1. Hihihih aahww REALLY, thank you so much, A!! ❤️❤️ I guess you are today’s my lonely and first comment😏😳 but you know I truly appreciate that!! I’m Glad you liked it. Especially the Ending 🙏🏽❤️❤️😊😊

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  4. “As I feel the breeze lingering over my ardour.

    So late from heaven, that dew, it fell

    mid dreams of holy ceremony.”

    Woww!!!! Beautiful lines, Jojo. 🙏💛

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      2. Great, Lia. Good to know all is well with you. Same here though! I have a week off from work at this moment, so I take the time to rest and invest some time into my blog 😊🙏🏽❤️

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      3. Ah that’s wonderful. I wonder what job you have. Is it stressful? I’ve just redone my resume. Hugs and have fun. 🤗🙏

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      4. Nothing stressful or anything, I work as an assistant manager in a high end clothing store. Full-time. It’s Just time consuming, and with the whole covid-19 my schedule is pretty much a mess 😂 but, I’m am handling it. No worries about that. Great to know that you still looking for a job. I Hope you ca find anything soon!! 😊❤️ Hugs back🙈❤️

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      5. Well that sounds like kind of fun!! Fashion, love. :))) Yes Covid has made the sitch very different out there in the work world indeed. Thanks for the kind thoughts 😊💛💛

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      6. Haahha it has it’s fun Indeed.😊 Can’t wait when the whole covid-19 is over…. But for now we have to accept it and do the best we can! Always my pleasure, Lia ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 keep it up!

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  7. Such a lovely line 😊 “As I feel the breeze lingering over my ardour”
    The waves and the breeze would then carry the fragrance of your ardour that you harbor to spread it everywhere 🙂

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