She was like the wonder of a tale.
Undeniable with her beauty
as she fought for her avail.
She slowly grasps for her heart
to show her love to al apart
as she reaches for the starry night
guided by the winds into her soul of wail;
“She has spoken with grace,
flown through earth space,
tears dripping from her face.”
By wind we follow her sail
while in promise we share our story
we stand tall for her detail.
She is nothing more than a friction
of an imagination in our minds
as she was the whisperer of a tale.
16 responses to “‘Saccharine,”
Writing all the favs isn’t a good idea because in each line she is described beautifully 💞💞
Still, the following resonates the most with me 😅
“While in promise we share our story
We stand tall for her detail”
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Hihihih Omg, Thank you so much, Nebula 🙈🙈 I’m glad you loved it so much 🤭 speechless at This moment. So you know, I get easily speechless when I receive compliments 🙈😳
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Oh I can understand, I feel the same – simply blushing 😅
Same pinch 😛😛
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Same pinch > Thank you!
Ahhaha oepsie 😳😳
Going to be honest with you, I had to Google the “same pinch” part 😳😂 a loving thing it is!
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This is so amazing, Jo! I can’t point a single line to say it’s my favorite! Its just awesome😍😍
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Thank you so much, nawazich 🤭🙈 I’m so glad you loved it so much 🤭🤭 speechless at This moment 😳😳❤️❤️
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Haha! I did like it a lot. Great work!❤
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Hihihih Thanks once again 😊❤️🙏🏽
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Ow wow!! I just came here after linking to an older poem of yours (‘Athena – hope you won’t mind!) and see this… very brilliant work Jojo. Nicely executed! 🙌💘⚡️🔆
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Hihihih thank you so much, Lia 🤭🤭❤️❤️ I truly appreciate it, for the shout-out and for the compliment!! You are amazing 🤗❤️❤️ I’m glad I met you in this community!!!!
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Jojo, this is a breathtaking piece to read. Wonderfully written 👏
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ST, Thank you so much 🤭❤️ I’m glad you liked it ☺️ Take care of yourself!!!
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Loving the way you are explaining ❤️❤️👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Hihihih aahwww!!! Thank you so, so, so much 😍❤️ I do my best 🤭🙏🏽🙈
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OMG…. Wow jojo. This is crazy beautiful. You describe her in such precious detail and she is so ever beautiful. Love love love it ❤️❤️
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Hihihih aahwww, thank you so much, A 🙈🤭 she, and that’s to all, is Very beautiful Indeed!! Glad you love, love, love it!!!😍❤️🙏🏽
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