‘Saccharine,

She was like the wonder of a tale.

Undeniable with her beauty

as she fought for her avail.

She slowly grasps for her heart

to show her love to al apart

as she reaches for the starry night

guided by the winds into her soul of wail;

“She has spoken with grace,

flown through earth space,

tears dripping from her face.”

By wind we follow her sail

while in promise we share our story

we stand tall for her detail.

She is nothing more than a friction

of an imagination in our minds

as she was the whisperer of a tale.

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16 thoughts on “‘Saccharine,

  1. Shooting Nebula says:

    Writing all the favs isn’t a good idea because in each line she is described beautifully πŸ’žπŸ’ž
    Still, the following resonates the most with me πŸ˜…
    “While in promise we share our story
    We stand tall for her detail”

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    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Hihihih Omg, Thank you so much, Nebula πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ I’m glad you loved it so much 🀭 speechless at This moment. So you know, I get easily speechless when I receive compliments πŸ™ˆπŸ˜³

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  2. Lia says:

    Ow wow!! I just came here after linking to an older poem of yours (‘Athena – hope you won’t mind!) and see this… very brilliant work Jojo. Nicely executed! πŸ™ŒπŸ’˜βš‘οΈπŸ”†

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    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Hihihih thank you so much, Lia 🀭🀭❀️❀️ I truly appreciate it, for the shout-out and for the compliment!! You are amazing πŸ€—β€οΈβ€οΈ I’m glad I met you in this community!!!!

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  3. silent poetry says:

    OMG…. Wow jojo. This is crazy beautiful. You describe her in such precious detail and she is so ever beautiful. Love love love it ❀️❀️

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    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Hihihih aahwww, thank you so much, A πŸ™ˆπŸ€­ she, and that’s to all, is Very beautiful Indeed!! Glad you love, love, love it!!!πŸ˜β€οΈπŸ™πŸ½

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