When I fall in your arms
I run towards my secret garden.
As I close my eyes, under water,
I ought to listen to you bespoken pardon.
Therefore, I hold my breath
until loneliness uncovers my cry.
As I drown with my lips sealed
you shall be written in the sky.
Down by the river my life ought to flow
wherefore I swim with one question; Why?
Why could I not speak, think nor see
as I remembered my last lie?
Here I had my first walk
while I had no time to say goodbye. ย
I have been helpless, hopeless,
as I neared my light in your eye.
While my shadow conformed my life
I drowned under a world with no retry. ย ย
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16 responses to “‘Drown,”
wow, impressive one! so deep!
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Thank you so much, zakia ๐๐ฝโค๏ธ glad you liked it so much!!
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It was really awesome, reading it! waiting for more to come up!
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#blessed โฅ๏ธ๐
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Jojo I Love this .thanks Anita
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Thank you so much, Anita ๐๐ฝโค๏ธ Glad you loved it!!
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Loved it โค๏ธ
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Thank you so much, dreamy!! Glad you loved it!!๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
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Jojo, great stuff! I really loved these two lines:
Therefore, I hold my breath
until loneliness uncovers my cry.
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Thank you so much, Eleanor! Truly appreciate your time for reading my work โค๏ธ especially the part you loving those lines ๐๐๐ฝ
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Always a pleasure to read your work! I have much to learn from you, Yoda! ๐
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That’s a honour, Eleanor! (Speechless) I just got the biggest smile, especially the “star wars quote”!!
“Do or do not, there is no try!”
Ps, I too keep on learning new things every day.๐
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OMG I LOVE YOU! ๐ So happy to know I made you smile! Even better you are a fellow Star Wars fan. I knew you were cool!
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Hahahaha we star Wars fan always find a fellow fan!! It’s like finding your soulmate in a way๐ anyways, Thanks for the smile, and may the force be with you ๐๐ฝ๐๐พ
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I know, right?! ๐ And also with you.
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Yes indeed!! Take care of yourself, Eleanor! See you around!!
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