Behind the secret valley

I swim below waters as I

close my eyes by tale.

For the wind lingers

through my body

as I engrave my vale.

With many faces

I follow my song

in earths trail.

For this belongs

to my ocean,

I be one with my sail.

To smell the air

I have faith until I fail.

For there are

no still waters

in endless wail.

Whom follows the

light behind my

curtains gale?

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55 thoughts on “‘Ennerdale,

    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      I love it whenever people read between the lines and have their own way of interpretation of something. Love, love, love it! And yes, I Tried to play with a little tone of yearning.

      Always a pleasure whenever you read my work! Truly appreciate it ❤️🙏🏽

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      1. selonnerias says:

        🙂 I had some thoughts about some parts of this poem being more fiction than other parts and combined them with some other thoughts the poem conjured in me.

        Liked by 1 person

      2. jojo alwaealy says:

        And I love how you did that! That’s why I love to write poetry☺️ it’s like reading a script, you can say it in 1000 different ways, as you can interpret it in different ways. You have done that and that means a lot to me ❤️

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      3. selonnerias says:

        Yes, the existence of different interpretations of something can be very fun.

        I don’t think there’s much of a wrong way to engage with art (debatable). To me that’s part of the beauty.

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  1. Doug says:

        Quite a lingering tale. Lots of rhyme to ponder.
        Behind the vale, there are secrets, in a valley that is a pause for a calm dream that tells the wind to catch a sail in the ocean or lead a motion of notions, the faces of schemes that sail or swim or drown in tears. Sometimes whales wail in gales long enough to be heard from the secret valley where a river flows to it.

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  2. Pruuu says:

    “With many faces

    I follow my song

    in earths trail.

    For this belongs

    to my ocean,

    I be one with my sail.”

    What a lovely poem you always write haan!! ❤

    Liked by 3 people

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