Behind the secret valley
I swim below waters as I
close my eyes by tale.
For the wind lingers
through my body
as I engrave my vale.
With many faces
I follow my song
in earths trail.
For this belongs
to my ocean,
I be one with my sail.
To smell the air
I have faith until I fail.
For there are
no still waters
in endless wail.
Whom follows the
light behind my
curtains gale?
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55 responses to “‘Ennerdale,”
Wonderful imagery!
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Thank you so much, Stephen!! Truly appreciate it!! ☺️
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You’re very welcome .
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🙏🏽☺️
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Beautiful poem dear bro…💞👍💥
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Thank you very much, bro 🙏🏽☺️
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The water speaks
Both in myth and math
It expresses a history of yearning
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I love it whenever people read between the lines and have their own way of interpretation of something. Love, love, love it! And yes, I Tried to play with a little tone of yearning.
Always a pleasure whenever you read my work! Truly appreciate it ❤️🙏🏽
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🙂 I had some thoughts about some parts of this poem being more fiction than other parts and combined them with some other thoughts the poem conjured in me.
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And I love how you did that! That’s why I love to write poetry☺️ it’s like reading a script, you can say it in 1000 different ways, as you can interpret it in different ways. You have done that and that means a lot to me ❤️
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Yes, the existence of different interpretations of something can be very fun.
I don’t think there’s much of a wrong way to engage with art (debatable). To me that’s part of the beauty.
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Yes indeed, amen 🙏🏽❤️ will said, thank you and take care of yourself 😊
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You too ❤️
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Sublime!
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As lovely your comment is, Filipa, sublime 🙏🏽❤️
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Your’re an inspiration Jojo! But you know that already! Have a nice evening.
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I do what I can do, that’s it.😊🙏🏽 But still, I’m grateful for your compliment! To you too a nice evening! See you around 😊
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Quite a lingering tale. Lots of rhyme to ponder.
Behind the vale, there are secrets, in a valley that is a pause for a calm dream that tells the wind to catch a sail in the ocean or lead a motion of notions, the faces of schemes that sail or swim or drown in tears. Sometimes whales wail in gales long enough to be heard from the secret valley where a river flows to it.
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B-E-AUTIFUL, Doug. Beautiful 🙏🏽❤️ well written.
I’m glad you liked my work, truly appreciate your time for reading my work 😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Bella 🙏🏽☺️❤️ Truly appreciate it!
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Simply beautiful 😍😍💜
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And simply I’m thankful for your time for reading my work ❤️🙏🏽 I’m glad you liked it!! ☺️
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❤❤pleasure is all mine 😊😊🙏🏻
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🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️❤️
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Lovely poem jojo. The rhythm is hypnotising.
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Thank you so much, truly appreciate your time for reading my work 😊🙏🏽❤️ glad you loved my rhythm!!
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“I have faith until I fail. For there are no still waters in endless wail.” What a powerful few lines.
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Thank you so much, Béa ❤️🙏🏽 glad you loved those lines 😊
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Your piece is magic ❤️
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And your loving comment is magical❤️ thank you so much for your time for reading my work, truly appreciate it!☺️❤️🙏🏽
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Very beautiful
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Thank you so much 🙏🏽❤️
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“With many faces
I follow my song
in earths trail.
For this belongs
to my ocean,
I be one with my sail.”
What a lovely poem you always write haan!! ❤
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Thank you so much, Pruuu ❤️🙏🏽
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much, akolzol!! Truly appreciate your time for reading my work 🙏🏽😊❤️
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Such a wonderful piece🤗
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Thank you so much, stelorafedie!! Truly appreciate your time for reading my work 😊🙏🏽 Glad you liked it!!
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You’re most welcome!
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Wonderful
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Thank you so much, Elizabeth 😊🙏🏽 truly appreciate your time for reading my work! I’m glad you liked it!
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Great words her, nice to meet you😃… really nice complet words with Metaphorical expression.
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Hi, mobarak. Nice to meet you too! I’m glad you liked my work, truly appreciate your time for reading my work 😊🙏🏽❤️
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thanks, i enjoying it with u. thanks again for you sharing with us, loking for next great post 👍🙏
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Thanks, brother!! Love the support!!🙏🏽😊
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I could feel this poem, it’s very beautiful
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Thank you so much for reading my work 😊🙏🏽 I’m glad you liked it! ❤️
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Really so beautiful ☺☺
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Vinay, thank you so MUCH. Your message got into my spam file, but I’m glad I found your comment. I’m so glad you liked it!! Truly appreciate it ☺️❤️
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It’s my pleasure my friend, really post was superb keep going my friend 👏👏
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Thanks Vinay, truly appreciate your support and loving words ☺️ I will do my best!!
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Most welcome bro jojo alwaraly ☺
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