JJ-stache

‘Sweven,

Don’t look back,

listen to the waves

of peace within

one snowflake.

The night we met

as I awake,

I feel my heartbeat

break.

I Can’t feel the words

as I breath,

but I lie awake.

Still no rain

for I am

blindsided forsake.

Hear my lips

dream by day

as I fall on my knee.

What’s meant to stay,

without force,

you will see.

To the blue

lonesome summer,

we glow with

the sea.

As I wander,

when it rains,

“do you remember me?”

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Do you want to “Help a brother out” please check out the next link; “JJ-stache” As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!

With much love & inspiration written by me,

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20 responses to “‘Sweven,”

  5. There’s a sadness in your poem, a loneliness and a wish to be remembered. You showed that well, and I also like the narrator’s reaching for peacefulness, as told in the poem’s beginning.

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    • Thank you so much, Dave, for reading my work🙏🏽😊 I’m glad you liked it. Truly appreciate it. And yes, there is indeed sadness, loneliness and a wish in my poem. Based on a break up. I always try to share my emotions/thoughts.

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  7. Always love your work I don’t know why. Like I surfed around to read poems from other people, but certainly I didn’t got much interest you know like to read their every poems. And yours damn I can’t just stop reading. Keep writing day by day, pages by pages, lines by lines, as your heart and mind says okay!?

    Lots of love!!Xx

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