Into the woods,
the night we met,
the moon brightens you.
Here I fall on my knees,
during the summer madness,
to have hope for a few.
A knot in my heart
whittles with words I did not knew.
Heavy breath burdens my
soul as I did not get through.
To say that I was in love
reprised my past to come to.
The silence was quiet deafening
As I wait for your words to be spoken.
Here I was a stranger,
lost in your eyes,
to as we were unspoken.
Now you have my heart,
shattered in puzzle pieces,
as we are heartbroken.
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With much love & inspiration written by me,
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29 responses to “‘Hiraeth,”
Awwww painful yet so beautifully written. Amazing imagery jj, can feel each line deeply, the sadness, the heartache, the loss, the broken… Thanks for sharing 😊🌹
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Thank you so much, A! Always love your feedback and support 🤭❤️🙏🏽 truly appreciate it!! And yes, this one was really sad, painful and broken 😭❤️
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Emotional and lyrical ride. And title is so apt.
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Thank you so much, Nishabd. Truly appreciate it ☺️❤️ glad you liked it!!
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Welcome.
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Poignant, but beautiful lines. Thanks 😊
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And thank you for reading my work, Kaushal 🤗🙏🏽
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Mystical and beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Isha ❤️ I’m glad you liked it!!
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Loved it.
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Hihihih even better 🤭🙈
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Haha
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It touched emotionally ☹️! Very well chosen words and an apt title jj ♥️
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Ahww Thank you so much, Arry ☺️ glad you liked it! I Hope you have been doing well?
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Yes I liked it! And yup! I’ve been doing well.. just a bit irregular with the blogs as exams are on😛
What about you? Hope you are doing well too! 😊
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Ahww, that’s Great! Glad to hear, and I totally understand! Exams aren’t fun, especially during the whole covid-19 🙃
Thanks for asking, I have been doing well! Busy, but the good kind busy! 🤭☺️
Take care of yourself ❤️
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Ya it isn’t fun🤪!
Ya Being busy in a good way is healthy! Carry on 🤭
Take care😊
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🤭☺️❤️
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Hey, (I will stalk you tomorrow – weekend), but did you check Amirah’s blog?
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Hi, stranger. Ahahha that’s okay. Did something happen to A? GOING to check it right now!!!
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Omg, how sad! Pff, I Hope she Will return asap! But, mostly important I hope all is good with her and her family ❤️
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hiraeth is such a gorgeous word ! i love what youve done with it in your poem !!
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It is, right. Such a lovely word. Thank you so much for your time to read my work 🤭❤️ truly appreciate it!!
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Beautiful lines and very expressive and I can feel the imagery in every line. I write poetry on my blog if your interested in looking at it & hope you have a great day !
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Ahww Thank you so much, truly appreciate your time to read my work 🤭🙏🏽❤️ ofcourse, I Will have a look! To you too a great day!!
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This feels just like a song that’s etched in our hearts forever! Beautiful ❤️🌸
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Hihihih aahhww, thank you so much, Sonali ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 truly appreciate it!
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Heartbreaking but still beautiful ❤
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Thank you so much, dear💔❤️🙏🏽
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