I Surrender…
Take my hands away from misery.
Let me scream…
As I was left behind with my own symphony.
I Have no history
as I was untold of the pain. What Am I
without thee, “you ask me.”
I Was born in darkness
with shadows to follow my shades.
Hear the sound of leaf
falling down in my space.
Let me undo my ohms,
my mother of al, see my face.
I weep in tears,
for I have lost my grace.
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14 responses to “‘Salute,”
Sadly beautiful 💔 You have expressed your pain in a beautiful way jj. Each line is felt ❤️🌹😊
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Thank you so much, A! 💔😢❤️ Glad you liked it, dear!
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i really enjoyed this one jojo. nicely crafted
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Thank you so much, Jay. Glad you enjoyed this one! ❤️🙏🏽
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As always, an excellent piece. Deeply moving. Thank you Jojo. Happy New Year. ❤😊👍
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Thank you so much, Suzette’. Glad it was to your likings. To you too a Happy new year ❤️🙏🏽☺️
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Thank you❤🙏
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Beautiful as always. 🤍 Full of such vulnerability and depth.
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Hi Ladonna, thank you so much, as usual ❤️😊 glad you liked it! I hope you are doing well? 😊
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🤍I am, and hope the very same for you.
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Same here, Donna. Thanks for asking 😊 have a lovely weekend, and take care of yourself! 🙏🏽❤️
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♥️♥️
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” I Have no history
as I was untold of the pain. What Am I ”
Ohh these lines killed me, I fuckingly loved it. Jojo poet sir you’re too much good at using words how many times should I say this!?
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Hihihih I’m glad you loved This one, Pruuu 😊 and, when you already Said it once you glowed my heart ❤️
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