Darkness unfolds the tide
to as we rise with the ocean
behind my tears of pride.
Which my soul got lost,
from a fall deep inside.
My dreamer of the shallow
I behold my whittled tongue.
To glare with my eyes
as a spell upon my skies. I am
as they say; “A lost star.”
To find none of the earth
I had to have hope by far.
By sight of the dark-night
I am one with earthstar.
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14 responses to “‘Earthstar,”
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Thank you so much, Kevin! Truly appreciate your time to read my work 🙏🏽😊
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Welcome 🙂
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Beautifully written and expressed jj… Very touching, with some deep feelings. Thanks for sharing such a lovely poem 🙂🌹⭐
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Hihihih thank you so much, A! I’m glad you liked it! A very lovely comment 🤭 and you know it’s always my pleasure to share my work ❤️🙏🏽
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Awesome piece
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The title caught my attention instantly and the actual writing was just spectacular. Lovely use of words and such beautiful emotions. Brilliant write-up!
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Ahhww Thank you so much, J🤭😳 truly appreciate it once again! Such a lovely comment ❤️ Glad you loved it!!
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Always my pleasure. You would think that a writer would take breaks and slow down on the creativity every once in a while but you seem to get only more creative as time passes. Raw talent there, friend. Great job.
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Ohww woow…. Speechless 🤭🙈 Thank you a thousand times, J. Really. This is so amazing to read! You have made my day!!❤️❤️
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Hope is the begining of life.
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Amen🙏🏽 that’s so true!
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” as they say; “A lost star.” ”
Fabulous lines and poem. Once again.
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And once again I thank you ❤️
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