To unfold the mystery
we must see with our eyes closed.
Hear my void fall into the darkness
as I whisper;
βTo not lose hope
I give you my heart.
As we seek for words to speak
do I prolong my luring thoughts?β
A Glance into the starry nights
as we rise with the moon
we belong to the looming sky.
Mother,
Do we speak of you as a rising star
or do we implode our hearts beyond wars?
I am one with stardust
as I am
afraid
to not be seen.


38 responses to “‘muse,”
Iβm elated that I follow your blog! Itβs freaking AWESOME! π
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π I second this wholeheartedly
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Such a talented creative writer π
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Hihihih ππ well, this “creative writer” truly has no words at the moment!! Trust me, whenever I’m speechless you have done an excellent job!!ππ½ππ½β€οΈβ€οΈ
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You have many words, I read them daily βΊοΈ Thank you for sharing such beautifully written pieces. I only wish I had more time to read through every wonderful creative writer I follow β¨
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Hihihih once again I say a thousands thank you ππ½β€οΈ and I totally agree with you, I too wish I had some more time to read everyone’s work!!
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Anytime my friend β€οΈ
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Thanks, dear!! Take care of yourself β€οΈ
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You too, Ben!! Thank you so much!! Such an honour! I’m speechless πβ€οΈ Just grateful!!!
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Aahww Thank you so much, Unique ππ totally speechless!!! Totally appreciate it β€οΈ
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Haha! Youβre amazing π₯³
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Hahaah yaaay, she thinks I’m awesome πππ
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I know youβre awesome! π
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Hihihih π€β€οΈ you too!!
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“A glance into the starry nights.” Love this poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much, Jade ππ½β€οΈ truly appreciate your loving comment and words!! I’m glad you loved it!π€β€οΈ Always my pleasure to share my work!
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Haha, you know I love reading your work. I might get behind sometimes but I always come back to it. Keep on writing and inspiring. ππ»
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Hahaha, yes I do know that!! π³ Truly get that, we are all busy with work/school and whatsoever. I will just do that, if you do the same. To write and inspire!β€οΈππ½
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BEAUTIFUL β€οΈ…. Really amazing piece jojo. The words are beyond magical. “As we rise with the moon we belong to the looming sky”. What a moving line. Loving it much. Beautiful work β€οΈβ€οΈπππΉπΉ
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Hihihih *blushing*!! Thank you so much, Amirah!! You Always seem to amaze me with your loving compliments! Truly Thankful for that!
Once again I’m happy to read that you loved it so much!!! β€οΈβ€οΈππ½ππ½
I Hope you are doing well, though?π
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It was my pleasure…. You are a poetic mastermind πβ€οΈ. I’m all good thank you, hope you are also π.
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Hahaha goshh, no words. Speechless! Me a “poetic mastermind”. This is the first time I have ever heard it and goshh…. Wowww!! You just made my day/evening/year whatever. Most beautiful compliment ever!!
Good to hear all is good with youβ€οΈ same here though, especially after a comment like that!!ππ
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Hahaha π. Awww that’s awesome β€οΈπ. You do truly have a way with words πΉ
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Hihihih blessed ππ½β€οΈπ€
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Beautifully penned Jo. β€οΈ
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Thank you so much π€β€οΈ glad you liked it!!
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Most stardust goes unseen
but your stardust is seen throughout the world
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Ohh’ yeas indeed, when people see the ugly I try to see the beauty hidden behind the blue skies. A future with beauty and no pain. A wish that could be true once in a lifetime!
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May we glide through quiet space and steer clear of the black holes along the way.
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Amen, Selonnerias!! Amen ππ½β€οΈ
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As always, beautiful. π€
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And as always; ‘thank you so much, LaDonna’ I truly appreciate it β€οΈβ€οΈπ€ππ½
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π “As we seek for words to speak do I prolong my luring thoughts?” π
Oh, I know this feeling. This beautiful line is magical.
“I am one with stardust as I am afraid to not be seen.”
We all have got our telescopes ready, go wherever you want, we all are following you! π
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Hiii Nebula, how have you been? I Hope everything is fine? I’m glad you loved those lines so much π I Hope I won’t get you guys lost if you all are following meπ³ππ
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Haaiiiiii Jojo, een beetje gek π We have marked the path with likes and comments, no one is gonna lost their path now. And yes, they are indeed beautiful lines.
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So beautiful
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Thank you so much, briar β€οΈβΊοΈ
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