I Sit and wait……
This symphony I hear in a stream
wandering down earth’s path.
No hymn follows my vein
while I linger with words
for a willow of thoughts.
I Am lost as I wait….
To feel or not to feel?
Of these questions I occur my heart
and I wonder hopeless throughout my part.
The waves of mother’s sea
has spoken to me.
I rise as I fall…
Take me away from these
thoughts of emperor
as I rise I choose to fall
for there is none to feel.
The only enemy there is
40 responses to “‘Ortu,”
Beautiful poem. 🥰
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Thank you so much, offshore 😊❤️ I truly appreciate it! I tried to do something else for once 🙈
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Wow….😊 Amazingly beautiful as always. It’s a nice difference jojo I actually really love it. A very special poem, it has so much beauty. The words fit perfectly together, like a symphony you hear in the stream ❤️❤️
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Hihihih aahww thank you so much, Amirah!! I felt like doing something else for one, and I’m glad you actually really loved it 🙈 was really nervous about this one! Little bit out of the comfort zone 😳 Always appreciate your loving feedback ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Your welcome jojo….. Don’t be nervous, whatever you write is always wonderful. We need to step out of our comfort zones sometimes ❤️🌹😊.
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Yeas Indeed! Well glad you think my work is Always wonderful 🤭❤️ I will keep stepping out of my comfort zone. Trust me 🙈🤭 it felt good to do!!
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Hallo! You know I rode that wave- _/\_. Oops that was a little rough ride 😅. But shall I feel or not feel! Nice REFLECTION 😃, jojo. What was in your head when you wrote “thoughts of emperor”?
Ps, wat is er mis met je commentaargedeelte 😕😒?
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Hey Nebula, hoe gaat het met je? Ik weet niet wie zij is, maar het begin opeens…..
“thoughts of Emperor” at that moment I was not in the ready to be strong, to fight, to be an emperor! Something in me was, but I wasn’t really. So that’s why to feel or not to feel.
It took me some time to understand myself, but more and more I get who I am supposed to be 🙈🤭❤️ just finding my way to express all of that!
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Hoi, ik ben geweldig 😁. And you are rocking.
Ohhh, I see (emperor). That’s so strong of you 💪🙏👏👏. Really appreciate it. “Enlightenment”( 😛) is getting to know yourself. All the best, vriend.
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Hahaha , you just said and I quote: Ik ben geweldig, that translates to “I’m awesome”. So you called yourself just awesome 🤫😏🙈 hihihih all the best to you too, dear 🤭❤️
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To feel or not to feel
favorite line, beautiful piece.
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Thank you so much, K!! I tried something else for once, and I’m glad people still appreciate my work🤭❤️ it’s Always tricky to try out something new, but I’m more and more open to try out new ways! Thanks for your support and time, K❤️🤭
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it’s beautiful
yes i get how tricky it could get, but it’s also amazing to try to express things in new forms and ways.
Good job
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True that 🙏🏽❤️ thanks for your encouragement and lovely words ☺️
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I Am lost as I wait….
“To feel or not to feel?
Of these questions I occur my heart…”
Wow! I am diving deeper in the ocean of thoughts with those words. So beautiful 🌸
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Hihihih aahww thank you so much, Sonali ❤️🙏🏽 I’m glad it worked out and People have Been loving it! This was a new thing for me to try out, and I’m glad it worked out !!❤️🤭. Take care of yourself
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You’re welcome! Keep penning down such amazing lines. ❤️
Take care🌸
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I sure will do that, Sonali!! Thanks for the motivation 🙏🏽❤️
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This is nothing less to magnificent. As the other comments pointed out,
To feel or not to feel….you truly are a master of your art. So so relatable and beautiful poetry.
Wow! Cannot return without reading it again.
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Hihihi ahwww shanyu, thank you so much🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️❤️ apparently trying out new things can work out well 😳 truly appreciate your time and comment ❤️
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My absolute pleasure friend. I can say this style’s working for you. I haven’t got to read a lot of your poetry in the few days, but as I cover up, I can see the jewels.
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Once again, Thank you so much. For all your kindness 🙏🏽🤭 this means allot to me!! Motivating and inspiring ❤️
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Again, my pleasure. Have a wonderful day.
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This was such an inspirational one! Loved reading it so much! Specially the ending lines!🥰😄😍
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Aahhhhwww thank you so much 😍😍❤️❤️ I’m so glad people have Been loving this one. I tried out something new and people have been loving it!!! Thank you so much, dear ❤️❤️ I’m glad you loved it!!
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Your welcome dear! Yaay! Wow that’s awesome. It was really amazing! It’s my pleasure! 🤗☺️😍💯
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Hihihih yaaay🤭🤭❤️❤️😍😍
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😊🤗😃
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Your words have such a spectacular depth. Beautiful write-up.
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Aahww Jade, thank you so much, dear ❤️☺️ I’m glad you like it! It means a lot coming from you❤️🙏🏽
I hope you are doing well, though? It has been a while! Have a blessed and strong week ahead!!
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Why of course. You know I love your work. 💙
I am doing well. Thank you for asking! I’ve just been caught up with writing my novel lately. I do hope to publish sometime this next year. I’ve been taking care of myself though. How are you? 🌻
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Hihih❤️🙏🏽
Good to know you have been doing fine, j! that’s amazing, can’t wait to see more of your novel. I know everything will work out for you, as you have such great and loving way of writing!!
I’m fine as well, been busy with work, writing and the gym, but the good kind of busy! ☺️❤️🙏🏽
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Haha yes. The good kind of busy. That is always brilliant. Glad you’re taking care of yourself. Have an amazing rest of the month. The year is going by quickly. 💙
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Don’t even start about “time”. Too fast and sometimes just not enough hours in a day🤣🤣 but, we will manage all! You too❤️🙏🏽
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Amen. I often wish I was nocturnal. I could spend my days living and my nights creating; but you are right. We can manage. There is always enough time for the important things.
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Amen ❤️🙏🏽 that’s totally true!!
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👍 personal insights allow us to dig deep into ya self 😷🙏🐕♒️💪🇩🇴🇺🇸🦠💀💩
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Yes indeed 👏🏽🙏🏽❤️
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I would again question you that, why do you write so fucking beautiful?
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Hahahaha, only YOU can judge that 😜🙈 I’m just the writer 😳
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