Through the winds I follow my stream
as I close my eyes and “feel” the soft breeze
I remain calm with the beauty in my dream.
To hear my thoughts fall down from the sky
As I whisper with my lips for a scream.
“I can not talk,
I can not think,
I can not pray,
as I capre diem.”
He who hears my word
therefore all grant my moon
as I begin my search within my heartbeat tune.


21 responses to “‘Obviate,”
I just love your expression ๐
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Thank you very much, Michelle ๐ I’m glad you love it๐โค๏ธ
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Beautiful words.
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Thank you very much, beachah๐คญ thank you for your time to read my work ๐โค๏ธ I’m glad you liked it โบ๏ธ
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A frenzy of emotions which youโve beautifully depicted ๐๐ซ
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Hihihih and once again I Thank you dearly, Hannah ๐๐โค๏ธ I’m glad you like it ๐๐ฝ
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Youโre most welcome ๐บ
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Well expressed.
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Thank you very much, Victoria ๐๐คญ I’m glad you liked it โค๏ธ๐
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Wild and recklessly cultivated! Bravo!
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Well, thank you very much, Tamara ๐๐คญโค๏ธ
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Emotions penned to words so well ๐๐ป๐๐
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Thank you so much, Akshitaโค๏ธ๐ค I’m so glad you liked it โบ๏ธ
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Your most welcome..! ๐ค๐๐
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Beautiful thoughts ๐๐ปโค๏ธ
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You are too kind, Thank you so much ๐โค๏ธ
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โค๏ธโค๏ธ….. Last part my fav. Although the entire poem is transcending. Beautiful thoughts, beautifully expressed, beautifully written ๐๐น
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Hihihih ๐๐๐ *speechless*โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ
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Okay again you’ve took my mind!! Adding it to my favourites!! ๐ญโคโคโค
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