I’m with the shadow,
with the brightest stars in the verse
as I seek my symphony in the unknown.
I’m the beam of sunlight,
the one and only yours truly afterglow.
As the story begins to fall
I surrender my heart for you to
grow,
Although; “I Haven’t met the end of the
story to let go.”
Shall I rise with the sun?
Speak with the moon nearing lunar?
Or as so speak meet my soul halfway
for the hollow glow?
Um, wow??!!!! This one strikes all my chords right now. So beautiful!!!
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Hihihih omg. Thank you so much, Lia π€π³π speechless at this moment π€ I’m glad you liked it so much π
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Filled with beautiful phrases!!! That last one so perfect and unusual too!! Gah it’s truly delightful, to me, this poetic tune. Like a rain with a sun and a bit of wild wind too. Kudos, and for the textually chiaroscuro delight, thank you. πβ€οΈπ
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Hihihih omg, you are too kind and amazing. I don’t know what I can say ππ only that I was inspired by the beach after my fun ride with the bike π that was my inspiration to write this one!
Thank you a thousand Times,Liaβ€οΈβ€οΈππ½ππ½ππππ€π€
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Well maybe we are having the same weather then! I was walking brisk in the pouring rain early this morning, and finished with a dip in the stormy sea. Heavenly!! You’re welcome dear Jojo… and thanks again. πππππ€
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It seems like it!! Thanks dear π€β€οΈππ
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This is so beautiful ππ
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Thank you so much, Hannah π€πβ€οΈ I’m glad you like it ππ½β€οΈ
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Youβre most welcome πππ«β¨
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oh wow buddy… found differently presented poem after long time. Nice one.
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Thanks very much, mate π I’m glad you liked it!! Appreciate it ππ½β€οΈ
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love it!
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Hihihih thank you very much, Francis π€β€οΈ I’m glad you loved it!!ππ½β€οΈ
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Wow. So many twists and turns. Like a dream run.
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Hihihih thank you so much Nishabd!! That’s a funny way of expressing itπ³π I like that! Thank you for your time to read my work β€οΈππ½
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Welcome. Actually the way you cit from one scene to another it felt like a screenplay
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Hihihih ππ€ I’m glad you could picture it as from scenery to scenery!! I Always try my best to picture my words and work π€
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Ong…lovelyyyyyππ
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Hihihih thank you very much, akshita π€π€β€οΈβ€οΈ
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Pleasure reading π π β€
Hope you have a great day ππ
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Yes, I do have a Great day. Hope you tooπ
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Glad to know that..!π
Yess, me too..!π
Be safe sound and happy..!
Take careπππ
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That’s Great!! Will do, and you tooβ€οΈππ
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THIS β€οΈ
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Hihihih thank you very much π€ I truly appreciate it πππβ€οΈ
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Woooooooooooow. :))
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Hihihi thank you very much, ma’am βΊοΈπβ€οΈ
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:)))
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OMG, thank you so much again for sharing my work πβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Superb… Too much to learn from you ππ»ππ»ππ»
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Ohww wooow, that’s so amazing to say.. I’m glad you appreciate it so much β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Delightful πΉπΉ
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it ππ½β€οΈπ€
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You’ve wrote so many things, so many poems indeed can’t read all, it’s way too much will need time but day by day I’ll read them all, as your poems are inescapable trust me. Never stop writing please.
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Take all the time and love you need β€οΈππ½ don’t Feel pressured, I already love what you have done!!
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