‘vitriol,

I asked myself; “Can I rest in peace, if not alone?”

To walk between a bliss

I have to share you my unknown.

As the story goes on, I can’t reckon my soul.

By thou means; “To break me bone.”

And as I counter my throat for your trust

I shall show you my dearest love by the known.

The goddess of love,  

Let us begin with a story to tell; “A twist from to be flown.”

One story,

one chance,

one day of adultery to be outgrown.

You have shown me to believe

in this misery of your own.

I shall not be your sorrow

as you have spoken with your lips of lies,

shared with your eyes of surprise

and cried with your tears of the deaths thrown.

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25 thoughts on “‘vitriol,

  1. Lia says:

    “You have shown me to believe

    in this misery of your own.

    I shall not be your sorrow

    as you have spoken with your lips of lies,”

    Well shown, Jojo. Thy words be thine own. Bravo! 🙌🙏💛

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    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Hihihih well, Thank you milady 🤭 you make me blissful blush 🤭🤭😍 I’m glad you loved that part. I tried to make a twist in the poem itself and that was the core part for the twist 🤭 thanks for noticing things like that!!

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    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Yaaay, thank you so much, dear ❤️😊 I’m glad you loved it 😊🙏🏽 oehhh, I Will definitely check it out, Thank you in advance ❤️❤️😊😊🙏🏽🙏🏽

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  2. silent poetry says:

    “As the story goes on, I can’t reckon my soul” this is hits deep…… Amazeeeeeeee. Truly powerful piece. Love every part ❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

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