Let me close my eyes
and sleep at last.
To remember the things
that have been haunting me.
I Have left it behind,
behind in the past.
Let me go and let me stand by my soul.
To we both have to say goodbye
because we didn’t outlast.
And I want you to know;
“Let me be the one
to stare with my eyes closed.
No more, no less, to be passed.”
Amazingly written. This poem is so powerful and deep. Great work here, and great words… ❤
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Thank you so much, Vall🤭 I’m glad you liked it so much ❤️
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““Let me be the one / to stare with my eyes closed.” Wow!!! It feels like we were on the same wavelength here. I was writing along similar lines earlier. (But, “poetry, interrupted.” 📽 💁🏼♀️ ;)) So lovely, Jojo, peaceful, and with a healing vibe. Thanks for providing gentle love, for tired eyes. 💛
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Hihihih it’s like great minds think alike 👀😳 the beautify of poetry and writing 🤭.. okay Lia, you have to help me out I can’t guess the movie 😭😂 you win THIS time 👀
Ps, Thanks for liking my work though🤭❤️ always love your comments!! (My eyes were actually closed when I wrote that part) 🤫😳
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deep thoughts! well written
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Thank you very much, Smitha 😊🤭 truly appreciate it ❤️
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Absolutely lovely ❤️💖💕
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Thank you very much, Laura 🤭❤️
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Wow! An incredible piece of writing 💛
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Sonali, Thank you so much 🤭❤️ Thank you for your time to read my work 😊 I truly appreciate it 🙏🏽❤️
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You write beautifully! Looking forward to read more❤️
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Hihihih thank you Very much. I do my best 🤭
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I really enjoyed the opening!
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Thank you very much, Doree. I’m glad you liked it 🤭❤️🙏🏽
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Agree with Lia, “let me be the one to stare with my eyes closed”…. Arrghhhhh 😮😮Where are you from????? Love it ❤️❤️
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Hahaha dammit!!! You made my Monday so, so, so amazing with all your comments and suprises 😍😍 just *speechless* ❤️❤️
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That’s great… You deserve it jojo ❤️
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And I want you to know;
“Let me be the one
to stare with my eyes closed.
No more, no less, to be passed.”
Oh Goodness!! Enough, still not much enough because your poems are inescapable for me I’ll read all of them, as uh know day after day. But like how the fuck some one can write this much beautifully!? Love it, it soothes my mind just as my heart does, and it’s always I’ve supported my mind instead heart so mind needs more rest than heart for me haha, because heart is already Phoenix so. Anyways you write too much good you know!? Well you should know.
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😍😳🙈 you get me more and more speechless after every comment 🙈 I Just have no words to your loving dedication to read all my work!!!!
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