I am alone
in the dark.
To as I
release
my heart.
A soft whisper;
“Are you enough?”
breaks me apart.
As I carry on
I feel my soul depart.
Here, with the black sky,
flowers bloom like art.
With hollow light
I see my lost rope.
To as I had no
time to elope.
Wherefore, I rise
I surrender my voice.
As clear the realm
had to become
my last choice.
With the fallen lands
time had me estranged.
For I have hope
even when nothing changed.
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78 responses to “‘Scars,”
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Thank you so much, Salman!🙏🏽❤️
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Welcome ❤️❤️❤️
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Hope is the beginning of life.😃
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And life is eternal🙏🏽☺️Yes Indeed, Lokesh! Well Said.
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Thanks for the completion, Jojo. 🤗
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And thank you for reading my work, Lokesh!! 🤗
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Quality and efforts always attracts me Jojo. Reading shows me ways to understand my ideas through others eyes. In this way, I can implement them better.
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🙏🏽❤️😍 well Said, Lokesh!
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Beautiful Jojo! ❤ I love “flowers bloom like art”.
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Thank you so much, Filipa! Glad you loved that line! 🙏🏽❤️🤗
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❤🌷
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Wow! I Don’t know what to say..
It’s beautiful ❤️
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And with a reaction like that you brighten my face with a smile ☺️❤️ thanks, dear!
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I’m glad! 😇
So so sweet of you ❤️
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Hihihih ❤️🙏🏽
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I love the promise of hope that comes through in your poem. Nicely done, Jojo😊
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Hihihih Thanks, Suzette! Truly appreciate it! Hope is why we are human beings!
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Yes! Indeed🙏
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Love!
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Thank you so much, Laura!! ❤️🙏🏽😍
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Jojo, brilliant as always my friend 💜
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As always I thank thee, my friend 🙏🏽❤️🤗
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Beautiful, deep and surreal
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Thank you so much, Shashi!! Glad you liked it! ❤️🙏🏽🤗
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These are amazing and positive words💗.
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Thank you so much, Anita!! 🙏🏽❤️🤗
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Beautiful.
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Neelam, thank you so much ❤️🙏🏽🤗
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You’re welcome Mr Jojo.
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Such a beautiful poem. Always hold on to hope, it is a powerful tool to behold.
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Thank you so much, thebenneys, truly appreciate your time for reading my work ❤️🙏🏽 I’m glad you liked it! And yes indeed, Always holding on to hope 👏🏽👏🏽
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I have read a few of your amazing and well written poems, I wonder how you are so creative and it seems so natural to you. Thank you for your reply
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Well, I should actually thank you , thebenneys, for reading my work!! Especially because you have read couple more of my work! And, to be honest; I don’t know how I could reply to your question🙈 the only thing I could say is that I really, really feel honoured by your compliment!! I let my emotions and music guide me through my work. People, like you inspire me to write and improve myself every time!! So, Thank you for this inspiration!
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I have enjoyed reading your work and will continue to read more. I think its truly inspiring that you have used your own emotions to guide your work. Ots strange how you mentioned that people like me are your inspiration to improve yourself because people like you are my inspiration to improve myself and reading fantastic posts gives me motivation to carry on as I have just started the blogging journey. I thank you for your honest and helpful comment. I hope you have a great day.
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Hahaha it looks like we both inspire one another!! That’s how life works 🙂 I want to thank you for the support and love you have give me with some simple comments!
Let me be the one who welcomes you to the loving community that we call “wordpress” as I always say; ‘one community one goal, to write and to inspire.”
You may call me JoJo or JJ 😉 to you too a great day and take care of yourself ❤️
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Wonderful!
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Thank you so much, Petey!! Glad you liked it!🙏🏽☺️
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Beautiful poem 🙂
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Thank you so much, dreamy parakeet! Glad you liked it!! ☺️🙏🏽
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Wonderfully expressed!
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Thank you so much, glad you liked it!! ☺️🙏🏽
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You’re most welcome!
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this reminds me of so many times- when i felt hopeless, frustrated, and miserable. i loved how you put so many feelings into this!
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Thank you so much for reading my work, moonstruck! I’m glad you loved it. Especially how you could relate to it.
I love it whenever one connects with one another throughout their work. 🙏🏽☺️
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indeed. 😅
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Beautiful poetry
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Thank you so much, Anand! Truly appreciate it. Glad you liked it ☺️❤️
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This is a very reassuring work, gives a certain sense of warmth and comfort. Beautifully expressed.
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Thank you so much, samsahana, for reading my work! I’m glad you liked it!! Truly appreciate your time and feedback ☺️❤️
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Beautiful. Sometimes a simple “are you okay” can also do wonders
More power to you 😊😊
Blessings
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Yes indeed, Apurva!! 🙏🏽☺️
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This is so beautiful ❤️
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Thank you so much for reading my work, deathmuse!! Glad you liked it, truly appreciate it ☺️🙏🏽❤️
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Do check out my blogs!! I’d really appreciate it!
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Beautiful
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” With the fallen lands
time had me estranged.
For I have hope
even when nothing changed. ”
How do you write so well, just answer me!!!! 😑❤❤❤
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Hahahahah you know I can’t answer that 🤣👀😜😘
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Nice
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Beautful
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Thank you so much for reading my work, glad you liked it ❤️🙏🏽
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Its algud..U welcome
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“are you enough”
Beautiful line
So lots of emotions
Beautiful
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Thank you so much for reading my work, glad you liked it ❤️🙏🏽
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Wonderful. Hope is not easy to come by
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Hi Erica, thank you so much for reading my work❤️ glad you liked it! And yes indeed, it’s not easy, but damn. Once you have it you keep it close to the heart!!
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Wow!! Awesome! Please follow me, loving me myself and I.
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much, jaym❤️🙏🏽
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Great
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Thank you so much ❤️🙏🏽
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