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‘Guilt,

Here I am, at stranger’s land,

hidden with the fallen.

Thus I fell upon each hand

as I believe in one miracle;

“To dream while I stand”.

I Conquered the world

by one little command.

To seek for the stars

I became one with wonderland.

Here I am, with no fellow men,

alone with earths hymn.

I Hear my song again

to as she whispers with

lingering thoughts of when.

To blindly trust the elephant

in the room, I seek for my men.

Their blood has spoken

to my trust for endangering lust.

The stars are yet here

to guide me through black dusk.

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10 responses to “‘Guilt,”

  2. The picture is great, the poem has it rhythmic problems but that can be easily changed if you work it over again.
    All the best
    The Fab Four of Cley
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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    • Thank you so much for reading my work, Klausbernd. Would like to say that I appreciate your feedback! I will remember it 😉 yet we don’t have to forget the rules about poetry, “to whatever you write there are no rules, but only emotions.”

      Take care of yourself!!😊🙏🏽

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      • Well, I would rather say if you choose a certain form of literary expression there are many sensible rules. To follow them helps the reader to understand and enjoy.
        Thank you very much for answering. By the way, don’t worry, that’s maybe professional deformation because I wrote a scientific book about the linguistic structures of lyrics, taught literature and have been editor. So I am maybe too critical. SORRY.
        All the best
        Klausbernd 🙂

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  3. ” Here I am, at stranger’s land,

    hidden with the fallen.

    Thus I fell upon each hand

    as I believe in one miracle;

    “To dream while I stand”.

    Loved itttttttttttttttttttt 😍❤❤

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