Under my skin, with everything that breathes,
in between the moments we write with sin.
For I have my shallow thoughts
I feel the desire of being vain as I have been.
Of the misty mountains, long faded from the dark,
I take you, tear by tear, down under the shadow.
Open my eyes and see what I see,
as I got to break free from below.
Hold my hand strong, guide me through,
as I am frightened for what I cannot feel.
Here I am, begging for mercy, not ready
to follow the light, I beg you as I kneel.
I will plea my final words to you;
“it’s not too late, as I am ready to heal.”
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With much love & inspiration written by me,
22 responses to “‘Heal,”
I hear two very different voices in this one. I’m going to have to think for a while – always a good thing in poetry.
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‘Thank you so much, LK!! I’m so glad you liked it so much! I hope you had plenty time to think about it 🤭
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Nice ‘tache Jojo…and nice poem! I hear a woman’s voice in this?
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Thank you so much 🥰 truly appreciate it! You can hear and feel whatever you like when you read my work! That’s the beauty off poetry!
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Only pure love & inspiration can write such a beautiful masterpiece. Loved your thoughts within the inner thought. Keep it up!!
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Ohww wow, Alice 🙏🏽 Thank you so, so so much for your kind and loving compliment! Just speechless ❤️ Truly appreciate your time to read my work!! 🥰
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So well written. Must read for everyone
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Thank you so much 😊❤️
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Why do you write so beautiful?
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🙈🙈 whoopsie 🙈🙈 ONLY you can judge my work ☺️ but, Thank you so much, Pruuu
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Will uh do me a favor poet sir?
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Depends on what the favor is, pruuu 👀
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I just want you to write one poem for me like.. I want a beautiful poem on Jesus Christ saying no matter what my child I’ve held your hand and I love you.
Will you please write it for me? Please!??
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You know what, Pruuu. Why not. I can do that for you, everything for my Little hearted fan. I’m Linda busy today and tomorrow. So I Will give it a try on Wednesday, is that good?
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Haha, I’m not in a hurry, you can write whenever you feel to, whenever you get mood for it, never pressures or anything, it’s just I love your writings so I wanna read one of my choices words from your, just that!! And thank you for writing it for me, I’m so happy!! Thank you so much!!
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Great, I Will do my best, dear. Glad you can appreciate it! I took a screenshot and I Will see if I can fulfill you expectations ❤️🙏🏽
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Don’t see, instead I believe you’ll just make me fall in love with your poem, I can bet!! ❤
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Hahahaha even better! Love the support!
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Will always keep supporting you!
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And that is something what I still can’t believe that people actually love my work so much that they want to support me and keep on supporting me!! You, Pruuu, have the most beautiful and truthful heart. The only thing I can say is that I totally appreciate your time, support, love and al the loving words I can say❤️
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Haha only a shooting star have the most beautiful heart trust me, not praising me but it’s the truth! Indeed.
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Ahhaha amen, that’s so true!!
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