Beneath the cold moon
I await my brightest sun soon.
For she speaks to my soul
I remember the light in the afternoon.
An angel caught my star
to as I whittle with scars.
Of witchery beyond earth-spell
I fell for your memoirs.
Tonight I breathe the breeze
of oceans wave. For I have
to hold my grudges, you have
your words in my heart to engrave.
Spread your wings and take
me away from misery all along.
To hear a bird sing daylong
I had to prove me wrong.
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18 responses to “‘Withdrawn,”
Flowy and awesome!
I love it
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Ahww Thank you so much ❤️☺️ I’m glad you loved it! I hope you are doing well ☺️
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there’s a lot going on here and there are some lovely lines 🙂
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Ahww Thank you so much, John. Truly appreciate your time to read my work 🤭❤️
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This is really beautifully written Jojo! Fresh and full of originality.
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Ahww, Lia. Thank you so, so much, sister 🤭❤️ glad you liked it!!
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Wow… Amazing. Exactly like Lia said fresh. A beautiful piece rich in fullness that speaks to hearts.
‘Beneath the cold moon
I await my brightest sun soon.
For she speaks to my soul
I remember the light in the afternoon.
An angel caught my star
to as I whittle with scars’
These lines really touched me. Absolutely beautifully written and expressed jj. Sweet lines ❤️😊🌹
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Hihihih ahww, this is Just a beautiful comment to wake up to! Really, Thank you a thousand times ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 I’m glad you liked it!! It’s an honour to know that my pleasure connects with one another!
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‘Beneath the cold moon
I await my brightest sun soon.’ loved these lines… Indeed many people wait for positivity in their life… Lovely poem jojo❤️❤️👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
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Ahww, thank you so much, Soni ❤️🤗 truly appreciate it! And yes indeed, it happens whenever it will happen!
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Wow! Beautiful lines!!
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Thank you so much, Kaushal 🤗❤️🙏🏽 truly appreciate it!!
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Oh Jojo
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🤭❤️🥰 enough said, Béa!! Thank you so much 🤭🙏🏽
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😍😍😍❤ Mmarveloooussss…..!!!
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Hihihih aahww thank you so much 🤭🤭❤️❤️
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“Spread your wings and take
me away from misery all along.
To hear a bird sing daylong
I had to prove me wrong.”
You’re just awesome at words, you must know this❤
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Hihihih ONLY know it because you Keep saying it🙈☺️❤️
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