‘Withdrawn,

Beneath the cold moon

I await my brightest sun soon.

For she speaks to my soul

I remember the light in the afternoon.

An angel caught my star

to as I whittle with scars.

Of witchery beyond earth-spell

I fell for your memoirs.

Tonight I breathe the breeze

of oceans wave. For I have

to hold my grudges, you have

your words in my heart to engrave.

Spread your wings and take

me away from misery all along.

To hear a bird sing daylong

I had to prove me wrong.


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16 thoughts on “‘Withdrawn,

  1. silent poetry says:

    Wow… Amazing. Exactly like Lia said fresh. A beautiful piece rich in fullness that speaks to hearts.

    ‘Beneath the cold moon

    I await my brightest sun soon.

    For she speaks to my soul

    I remember the light in the afternoon.

    An angel caught my star

    to as I whittle with scars’

    These lines really touched me. Absolutely beautifully written and expressed jj. Sweet lines ❤️😊🌹

    Liked by 1 person

    1. jojo alwaealy says:

      Hihihih ahww, this is Just a beautiful comment to wake up to! Really, Thank you a thousand times ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 I’m glad you liked it!! It’s an honour to know that my pleasure connects with one another!

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  2. Soni Cool😎 says:

    ‘Beneath the cold moon

    I await my brightest sun soon.’ loved these lines… Indeed many people wait for positivity in their life… Lovely poem jojo❤️❤️👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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