As I could do what you do
while we are pre-occupied in our own make-believe world.
Though we shall run
to defeat whatever could be hurled.
My nemesis, known as oneself,
I shall not be frightened as I do it for you.
Never have I lost, to sooth, nor won
an battle fought one many too few.
I Will hurl that handgun
as hope is my number one.
Have I not spoken of the truth?
A Shallow of shadows hidden as we begun.
Until I lose my breath
I shall take a leap of faith beyond my morning sun.
Do you want to โHelp a brother outโ please check out the next link; โJJ-stacheโ As love is a mystery felt by your heart we need to support one another. Do not feel obligated to do so, just have fun. I Want to thank everyone for taking their time to read my work!
With much love & inspiration written by me,


7 responses to “‘Dawn,”
Beautiful jj โค๏ธ very pure words fashioned into amazing lines of beauty…. Sadness but hope prevails. Great piece ๐โค๏ธ๐น
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Hihihih aahww thank you so much, A! Your message got lost in my spam file, don’t know how. But I did see it eventually!!โค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ I’m so glad you liked it!๐
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We are all pre-occupied in our own worlds – make-believe or not, aren’t we? Great poem. Thanks for stopping by my blog, Always Write. I hope you have fun and play along with Writer’s Quotes Wednesdays Writer’s Challenge and come up with another great post in response to a quote. It could even be one from this poem. ๐ Marsha ๐
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Hi Marsha, Thanks for reading my work! I’m glad you liked it! Truly appreciate your time. I Will see if I could be any of Help to your Challenge. It’s sound like fun actually ๐
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I hope you have fun with it, Joni. Iโll look forward to reading what you have to say. ๐๐๐
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Thanks, Marsha ๐๐๐ฝ Take care of yourself, and have a lovely holidays!!
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You, too, Jojo. ๐
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