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‘Elevation,

Oh’ hear the mountains echo

within the looming sky.

As I hear words of whisper;

“From dust to dawn

I hereby declare my soul free to the eye.”

A Walk, to draw one’s path,

while I wander I seek to beautify.

Therefore,

A wonder hidden in one raindrop

flows through my heart as I fly.

To have a journey,

as I follow,

I shall not forget my battles cry.

Hear the mountains echo

with the worlds grace

hidden in the voice of mother’s lullaby.

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21 responses to “‘Elevation,”

  1. Wow jojo, it’s beautiful ❤️. Last line most definitely my favourite line. However the entire piece is amazing, subtle, pure and peaceful. ‘therefore a wonder hidden in one raindrop flows through my heart as I fly ❤️❤️, perfect. Wonderfully expressed and written. 🙂🌹

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  6. And this work of your’s my friend has stuck with my soul, i really love this poetry, i came back to this one and read it so many times 💖👍🏻💝

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  7. Pleasure is all mine… it is really soothing to mind and soul!!! Keep it up 👍🏻❤💝💝❤ looking forward to see more and more of these work of art😍😍❤👍🏻💖

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    • I Will definitely do that! Thank you so much for your support and time 😊❤️ you have made me smile, and that’s the most precious thing you could do to me😊❤️🤗

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  9. “A wonder hidden in one raindrop

    flows through my heart as I fly.

    To have a journey,

    as I follow,

    I shall not forget my battles cry.”

    Every time you kill me by using your words so poignantly Jojo sir. I’d love to say 3000 times that I love your poems 3000 × infinity😭❤❤❤

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