To see the edge
I Shall not show you my rare.
As I behave alone
we speak of the truth,
where no mercy beholds my glance of glare.
I’m within my thoughts
as I do not belong,
I surrender to you; “A place of where.”
To feel of none
I shall not show you a single tear.
As I wait,
I show you my veins
running through my last prayer.
In time I do trust
as to heal my wounds ne’er.
To stray of light
I bathe with hymn of flair.
Whereas my soul wanders
with you, to a moment of scare.
JJ-stache 
18 responses to “‘Succumb,”
No words left 🙌🏻🙌🏻🙌🏻 poem is in your soul jojo…👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 You are a great inspiration 🙌🏻❤️❤️❤️
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Hihihih aahwww Thank you so much, Soni!!!🤗🤗😍😍 Gosh…. I truly appreciate it ❤️ speechless 🙏🏽🙈
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Don’t worry, Soni – JoJo has enough words for all of us 😀
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Aahhww, thank you so much, Ben!!🙈🤭
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Wow….. Amazing ❤️ What a beautiful piece. Took me places. Perfectly expressed. Just lovely ❤️😊🌹
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Hihihih 🤭 I’m so glad you loved it 🙈 truly appreciate your loving comment!!❤️❤️😍😍
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So welcome ❤️
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Another great one!
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Thank you so much, Bella 😊🙏🏽❤️
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♥️
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lovely poem; I love your photograph too; I would like to use it in a post I have written called: ‘Your face my friend is a poem’ ; it is an ode: the only line you might feel uneasy about is ‘I bet you’re bit of a buffoon too’ ; I await your permission 🙂
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Hi John, wow. This is such surprising and so amazing!! I wouldn’t ever think anyone would like to use my work for own use, so yes. I give you my permission to use my work. It would be fun to see what you have done with it!!! 🙏🏽😊
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well, what I really am asking is permission to use your wonderfully expressive face, those two photos of you at the top of each post; I would not be using your words though I would draw attention to your website 🙂
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Hi John, now I get it. And, you know what. You may use my picture. You have my permission! I’m fine with either idea, can’t wait to see it.
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great; I think you’ll like it; I’ve not done anything quite like this before but I’m working on it now; hope to be up in the next hour or so; I’m just as excited as you are; and if there’s anything you don’t like let me know and I can edit it out
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Sorry, John.i was really busy past 2 days. But wow, you truly have done some amazing job! I truly loved it! And truly appreciate it!!❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Amazing man… It’s been a while… I always love reading your work
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Veera, long time no see and speak. How have you been? Best wishes for 2021😊❤️ and Thank you so much, truly appreciate your support and comment😊 good to know that you love to read my work!!
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