There she was; waiting in layers of delight,
while moving clockwise.
This smile hidden deep behind her agony
as she shows me the world in her eyes.
She glooms and praises her love,
while lost in translation she speaks for the skies.
She spoke in tussle
as her lips whispered;
“Take me home, as I await the truth of the wise.”
I am in touch with her agony
as I resend her pain likewise.
Let us not dismantle
as we wait for the time of sunrise.
A hope,
a mystery,
as she belongs to our hearts
we shall arise.
17 responses to “‘Dolore,”
Awwww this is beautiful ❤️❤️
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Hihihih thank you so much, dear 🤭😊❤️
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Very welcome 😊
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I love that your poetry leaves so much for the reader’s mind to decipher. Amazing.
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Thank you so much for that amazing compliment, Ben!! I do actually try my best to achieve that, Because we all interpretat things differently. Glad you noticed it. 🙏🏽😊🤭 And as humble I’m I have to say; “I Just do the best I can and have fun doing it!”
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Well, keep on keepin’ on! 😀
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Wow this is so good👌👌👌
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Hihihi thank you so much ☺️❤️
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Your welcome 😃
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Wow awesome
Hi dear
Would be glad if you follow my blog
Would love to have you as friend
Will follow your page too
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Thank you so much, little mermaid 😊🤗
And of course, my pleasure to follow you! 😊
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Thank you
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This is a really lovely poem! I love how you make the poem open to interpretation, so that every reader will take something different out of the poem. You wrote this poem so well and I look forward to reading more! Thanks for sharing 🙂
Feel free to read some of my blogs 🙂
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Nirashah, thank you so much for reading my work 😊 I’m glad you loved it!!
Of course I will do that 😊
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Thanks Jojo.Love this poem .
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And thank you so much for reading it, Anita 😊🙏🏽
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Lovely one.
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