To be in love
while in faith we have lost.
I have shared my heart
with you to be easily tossed.
To seek pieces of my heart
within stars of time
you have healed my trust.
To believe that no time
can behold our home,
the gazing skies of wanderlust.
As age defines beauty
they say;
“To love and to feel
we have to wonder in mystery.
as the stars look upon us
We have more than one history.”
20 responses to “‘l-o-ve,”
Beautiful.
thump 💓 thump 💓
Still in love, with faith healing.
Still in love, with stars feeling
my heart’s pieces.
Still in love, with you stealing
again those pieces.
thump 💓 thump 💓
But why did you write “love” as “l-o-ve”?
Ps, I made that ‘l’ -> I, ‘o’ -> ‘u’, ‘ve’ -> ‘we’!
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Woow, B-E-AUTIFUL, nebula 😍🙏🏽 Thank you for sharing that lovely piece with me!!
I’m going to be honest with you, Nebula. I had no reason why I wrote it like that. It Just felt right and my fingers did all the work I just followed my intuition! Sometimes I like to do things differently 😂🙈🤫
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Amazing jojo…..❤️ It has so much depth… Within stars of time, to love and to be loved is a paradox in every paradigm….. Within stars of time, I love it, it is a very beautiful line. Superb dear. Thank you for continuing to share your creativity ❤️❤️.
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Hihihih thank you so much, SP. I’m glad you l-o-ved it 🤭🤭❤️❤️ truly appreciate it!!
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Nice one!
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Thank you so much, Jay!! 😊😊
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Beautiful JoJo! 😍
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Thank you so much, K!! Was really busy today, just got back from the gym!! but I’m glad you loved it!!! 😊❤️
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I have been coldhearted for a long time, even i can feel it😍. Love this one
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In time we will heal,
In time we will feel peace
In time we will start over again!
I’m glad you loved it, brother❤️🙏🏽 thank you so much 😊
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I could totally feel this! Amazing one!🥰😄
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❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 Totally appreciate it!!! Thank you for your time to read my work 🤗☺️💯
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Anytime dear!😄🥰
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Thanks, love❤️🙏🏽
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My pleasure!🥰😄
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In love with ‘l-o-ve’. Beautifully expressed ❤️
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Ahww Thank you so much, Sonali 🙏🏽🙈❤️
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You’re welcome Jojo! 💕
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“To love and to feel
we have to wonder in mystery.
as the stars look upon us
We have more than one history.”
Too much classy and beautiful. Loved these lines very very muchhhhh. Just feel in love with these lines trust me! You’re way too awesome poet. Never ever stop writing for the sake of God!!
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Yes, ma’am!! I shall not stop!! ❤️
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