JJ-stache

‘outlander,

Will you take me home?

To a place I belong?

As I am afraid

you would never treat me strong.

I Have made many mistakes

that speak me wrong.

By these thoughts you have

you have me lifelong.

Wait and see;

“By these nights

you have the moon,

the stars

and the ohms of the sky all along.”

In trust we share our stardust

as we hear the stream wandering

without our song.

.

.

.

A Rose,

within the thoughts of an elephant,

to behold with your grace.

You see;

“The agony and pain in my arms

have been lifting and rising thou

strength for no one to embrace.

These are within my hands

As I choose to erase.”

To not forget I set loose one petal

at time for this eternal disgrace.

.

.

.

To fly,

To think,

I set myself free from the pain.

As I scream for your attention

I fall without hope down the drain.

one step at a time,

one step to move,

I start to forget about thee again.

Let me rise as spoken by me;

“I have no chance to follow you to Spain

as my story begins from one place

as said by mark twain; ‘If I tell you the truth,

you don’t have to remember anything.’

With these thoughts you are like drops of rain.”

To think;

“Will

you

take

me

home?

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29 responses to “‘outlander,”

  1. Your words, my song/mood (I belong to you, I can’t pause it)! So, it follows:

    I now reside in barren land
    Our stardust our sky our song
    I left my home in your hand
    Alone I can’t carry
    I am not strong
    You don’t have to follow
    I left me in your place
    Not one petal
    The entire rose and its grace
    My moon my stars
    They are your memory
    You are my sky
    A sky where I wish
    All my petals fly

    btw why elephant?

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  2. “I have no chance to follow you to Spain”. Creativity at its best boss. Kindly follow me on my blog 🙏

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  4. You are simply astonishing… ❤️. How do you write so so so beautifully well? Your words are truly intoxicating.

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    • Ahww thank you so much for that amazing compliment, silent poetry!!!!! THIS JUST MADE MY SMILE SHINE WITH GRATITUDE!!!! I still can’t believe people truly love my work!! And yeah, I can’t explain how I do it😳😂😂 I just do it and write what my heart’s speaks, what my mind thinks and follow the flow of my fingers!!

      thank you for making my day, silent poetry ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 I feel honoured and blessed!!

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      • Your most welcome…. ❤️. Lovely to make you smile 🙂. Your so appreciative, such a kind heart you have. But honestly I should be thanking you. For sharing your thoughts and what your beautiful heart speaks. Your talent is beyond words, your poetry opens something in my soul. 🌹🌹❤️❤️

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  6. Oh my gosh, I almost don’t have words for this. My heart felt like it literally stopped. This is, by far, one of my most favorites you’ve written. So heartfelt, and such a deep solitude of a human soul. I’m truly speechless. Wonderful, wonderful write-up. 💙💙💙

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    • Wooow, J🤧🤧🤧 you left me speechless with such an amazing compliment!!!!!!😍😍 I just have no words!! only Gratefulness from my heart and mind❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 I’m so thankful with an amazing friend like you! Thank you so much 🤭❤️

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      • Seriously my pleasure. I love your writing and even after that, I still seem to fall in love with your writing all over again every once in a while. You have a lovely spirit and an outgoing creativity. Thanks so much for always sharing. 🌻

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      • That’s means so much to me ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 and for everything likewise, J! Like truly z your work is define, beautiful, precious and just the right words at the right time and right!!❤️❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽

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      • Those words mean the world to me. Thanks so much. It’s amazing to think last year I thought my writing was trash and this year I’m surprised more and more with wonderful kindness. Thanks so much for being a friend in my path of becoming an author.

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      • I totally get you!! Been there as well, and I’m still amazed by the Idea that people love and or like my work! And thank you so much too, J🙏🏽❤️ your path Will come true, one day! No doubt🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️❤️

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  9. Adding it to my favourites!! Nothing else I could say, it’s beyond everything. Uh know I remember, once uh said there was a time you were afraid of sharing your work, cuz uh felt someone will copy it but trust me, trust me my poet sir. My Jojo sir, no-one, no-one in this entire universe can copy the shine of a sun, and sun never fades away, it always shines as a fearless waves. Your words, your poems are succha fearless and no-one can ever take their name on it, no-one, fucking no-one, and if mistakely if anyone will do trust me I’ll be always there standing with uh as a spirit to support you and to haunt that fucker bitch jerk human who would think of doing that!!! I LOVE YOUR WORK THISSSSSSSSSSSS VERY MUCH, THAT I ALSO HAVE SO MUCH ESTEEM FOR YOUR WORK, LIKE IT JUST SOOTHES MY HEART AND SOUL SO MUCH. YOU DESERVE EVERY LOVE, THE UNIVERSE COULD GIVE YOU. MY MR. POET!!!!!!!! Sending you lots of Love and happiness on your way. NEVER STOP WRITING NEVER EVER!!!!!❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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