I Close my eyes at night
to open my heart for you to see.
โNightmaresโ the misery of all
as I have one wish; oneโs heart to be free.
Truthfully I share you my screaming memory.
To have strength,
to have will,
to open my soul with your missing key.
From wishing to believing
I slowly reach out with my hands to your face
as the waves hold the sea.
.
.
.
I Open my eyes in the morning
to an empty bed without thee.
My soul lost hope,
my heart rate slows down,
as I drop a tear for how it has to beโฆ.
A memory,
A fiction,
An imagination,
honesty, this was my plea.


32 responses to “‘Shiver,”
What a magic you create with your pen โค๏ธ๐
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Hihihih thank you so much, K๐คญ๐๐ฝ that’s so lovely of you to say โค๏ธ๐ฅฐ
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You’re welcome โค๏ธ
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Well penned๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป
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Thank you so much, Soni ๐๐ค thanks for your time to read my work โค๏ธ I truly appreciate it ๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
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JoJo, ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
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Let the tears wet your cheek
Theyโll carry away all the bleak
As the sky holds the moon
May Hope clasp your soul soon
Your open heart, why didnโt she see?
I hope you find your missing key.
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Omg Nebula, this is so beautiful โค๏ธโค๏ธ Thank you so much for your kind words and this Lovely little poem!!
You have suprised me with the most amazing compliment/respond ever!! Hihi I Grant you a thousand thank you from my deepest heart!!โค๏ธ๐ค๐ฅฐ
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How enchanting โจ you have a way with words
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Hihihih I’m glad you liked it, Hannah ๐คญ๐ค thank you so much โค๏ธ๐ฅฐ
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You are most welcome, itโs a pleasure to be able to read your work ๐ซโจ
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And that to me means allot๐ค๐๐ฝโค๏ธ I’m glad you like to read my work โค๏ธ๐
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Aww of course! ๐ค๐ฅฐ
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Very beautiful Jojo. Reminds me of the lady of shalott. ๐๐๐ถ๐๐๐
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Hihihih thank you so much, Lia ๐คญโค๏ธ that’s an huge compliment ๐ณ๐๐คญโค๏ธ too kind of you to say ๐๐ฝ๐คญโค๏ธ๐๐
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Magical…. I’m lost in your words. Your amazing. ๐น
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Aahww thank you so much for the loveโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ truly appreciate it ๐๐ฅฐ
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I enjoyed this write-up! Quite brilliant. Loved the third line and the line, “as the waves hold the sea.” That was amazing. Keep it up! ๐๐
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Hihihih thank you so much, J๐๐คญ glad you liked it ๐๐๐ฝ “as the waves hold the sea” was my favourite part as well ๐คซ๐ณ
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Beautifully penned!๐ฅฐ
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Hihihih thank you so much, dear!! Glad you loved it โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ
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My pleasure! Hehe๐คโบ๏ธโค๏ธ
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All posts are super.
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Thank you so much โค๏ธโค๏ธ I’m glad you liked it so much!!
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welcome
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I am moved. The realisation of the morning is so touching.
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Aahwww thank you so much ๐คญ๐คญโค๏ธโค๏ธ glad you feel like this!!
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I am glad that I stumbled upon your blog. Will keep returning.๐ค๐ค
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I’m glad you truly like my work!! I feel honoured and blessed by that thought!! Thanks in advance for all the love ๐คญโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ
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“I Close my eyes at night
to open my heart for you to see.”
Again adding it to my favourites Jojo sir ๐ญโคโค
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Hihihih another one in your favourites โค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐
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