Oh’ hear me chatter my misery.
Not to heal from pain off oblivion, Do I have this
Endless aspiration of seeking beauty within.
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My grail of massacre from eyes of sin.
Only I can descend and
Realm the chills on my skin. To you I say;
“Eye for an eye as the enemy has been.”
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Complete me and and let me fall for the odds.
Have I not shown you my flaws from the begin?
Answer my question with honesty.
Nor lies of grim to belong. this path we follow
Conflicts our predicted future. To you I say;
“Endless aspiration of seeking beauty within.”
Lovely. Especially the line, Complete me and and let me fall for the odds. It portrays falling for uniqueness rather than searching for some perfection. Great poem!
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Christin, thank you so much. I’m glad you liked it!😊 Great eye on that one 🤭
thank you for your time to read my work 😊
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my pleasure.
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I love your views and how you expressed them.
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Kally, first I want to say; thank you so much for taking your time to read my work, and thank you for liking my work 😊
Second, I do my best 🙈 I think that’s the best what I can say. So you know, I’m not that good with receiving compliments 🤣😳
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One more chance?! EXCELLENT~
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Thank you , thank you very much 🙈 I’m glad you like it🤭 fyi, Thanks for Always taking your time to read my work and support me with your lovely likes 😊
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