JJ-stache

‘One more chance,

Oh’ hear me chatter my misery.

Not to heal from pain off oblivion, Do I have this

Endless aspiration of seeking beauty within.

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My grail of massacre from eyes of sin.

Only I can descend and

Realm the chills on my skin. To you I say;

“Eye for an eye as the enemy has been.”

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Complete me and and let me fall for the odds.

Have I not shown you my flaws from the begin?

Answer my question with honesty.

Nor lies of grim to belong. this path we follow

Conflicts our predicted future. To you I say;

“Endless aspiration of seeking beauty within.”

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15 responses to “‘One more chance,”

  1. Lovely. Especially the line, Complete me and and let me fall for the odds. It portrays falling for uniqueness rather than searching for some perfection. Great poem!

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    • Kally, first I want to say; thank you so much for taking your time to read my work, and thank you for liking my work 😊

      Second, I do my best 🙈 I think that’s the best what I can say. So you know, I’m not that good with receiving compliments 🤣😳

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  4. This gave me chills… You are seriously extremely and beautifully gifted. You remind me a little of my very famous poet Rumi (RA). 💕💕

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  5. No sure about that generalisation hehe 😜😂. Joke. Umm no not Afghan, just love that particular poet 🌹

    Yeah that’s ok, you deserve that respect you are also an amazing poet ❤️

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