JJ-stache

‘Orenda,

 

Lift me up and take me in search for desire,

for I have lost epiphany in my hope,

“spoken truthful”

I sought my words by liar.

One by one I shake off my hands from myself,

to become less,

to be stronger,

then the fear of frightening “self.”

I’m my own last ambition,

for I speak Lycian,

Truly no understanding of my position.

I counted my last ammunition;

“shoot your shot and don’t miss….”

for

I

Have

One

Last

Mission.

30 responses to “‘Orenda,”

  3. Your written pieces are outstanding. Please consider recording yourself reading one from time to time—and sharing the audio. I’ d so enjoy hearing your interpretation.

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    • Thank you so much, Brockelman😊 that’s a huge compliment, and I truly feel honored by that idea. I was actually thinking about doing spoken poetry. Just have to work out everything to set up, but I like to hear it that other people motivate me as well to do it!! Thanks for taking the time to read my work ♥️🙏🏽

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  6. I love this one so much and I don’t even know exactly why. I guess I can simply relate to it. Also it’s very beautifully penned. That title and the Lycian detail! Amazing. Hugs, friend. 🙏🙏🌟🌟💛💛

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    • Awww, Lia. Thank you so much, dear❤️
      It’s funny how we sometimes we can relate to something without really knowing why.
      Thank you, thank you so much! Really!!
      😊😊🤗🤗❤️❤️

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  7. “to become less,

    to be stronger,”

    This is so deep, to become less to be stronger, we usually think that we need more to be stronger, but sometimes strength lies in less.

    I really loved this poem

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    • Hi DopeMom1,

      Firstly I want to say hi and welcome,
      Thank you for liking my poetry. It truly means a lot to me ❤️ I appreciate your support.

      Secondly, I don’t know how I inspire you, but I’m glad I do it though ☺️ you have to know I Always get a Little shy when people give my work compliments 😳🤗
      So I’m truly thankful, DopeMom1 ❤️

      Take care of yourself,
      JoJo❤️

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    • Suzette, thank you so much, dear❤️
      I’m so glad you loved it ☺️ your comments Always mean allot to me🤗

      This part was something that was stucked in my head all day until I got home back from work and sat down to write. Without thinking I wrote it down and I kinda felt released from thoughts. So yeah, I’m glad you loved it🙈☺️

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  11. ” One by one I shake off my hands from myself,

    to become less,

    to be stronger,

    then the fear of frightening “self.”

    This hit me so hard, it’s like like of mine is just this, each day am in fear and then I feel am becoming more stronger, it’s so gibberish thing about life, we cannot find its language that it uses for us!! You always took off the opener of a tin. More love to you poet sir!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤

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