‘fervour,

Take me to a place,

where I can smell your grace.

Take me away,

to a Laughter of child’s play.

Take me home,

from sin city to Rome.

I’m lost,

where paths have been crossed.

I’m hiding,

to a symphony of world guiding.

I’m seeking,

from ohms to thorns that have been speaking.

Make me blind by touching my fervour,  by thou means;

In the seeker of more I share my heart,

to a walk down the sunset I blindly follow,

As Impure,

As by thou Allure,

As I am taken by your highly cure.

19 responses to “‘fervour,”

  1. Astounding lines and imagery…

    “Make me blind by touching my fervour, by thou means;” especially, and onwards…

    Yes, we gladly go blind following our fervour for someone we fall in romantic love with, especially when we sense their “touch”/response to it. And sometimes the cause of the pain or sacrifice leads to the cure. So beautifully written, the capitalizations and other Jojo-isms… and another very fetching photograph choice as well. Hugs dear friend, for sharing your magical poetry.
    💛❤︎♡🌻

    Liked by 3 people

    • Thank you so much, Lia!
      Your comments are always on point and very thoughtful. I’m glad you liked especially that line. It was indeed supposed to be the core of the whole poem. When i wrote that part I was like; “hopefully at least one person will get it”! You showed me you did, so that a Hugh honor♥️

      Hahaha do i have my own jojo-isms 🙈🙈 i think that’s a huge compliment, right 😳♥️

      You know i love it yo share my work, you make me inspired and feel the need to share. Thanks to people like you i didn’t give up yet♥️

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  2. Make me blind by touching my fervour,  by thou means;

    In the seeker of more I share my heart,

    to a walk down the sunset I blindly follow,

    From where you bring the words so perfectly Haan? Tell me!!😑❤❤

    Liked by 1 person

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