Oh’ hear the mountains echo
within the looming sky.
As I hear words of whisper;
“From dust to dawn
I hereby declare my soul free to the eye.”
A Walk, to draw one’s path,
while I wander I seek to beautify.
Therefore,
A wonder hidden in one raindrop
flows through my heart as I fly.
To have a journey,
as I follow,
I shall not forget my battles cry.
Hear the mountains echo
with the worlds grace
hidden in the voice of mother’s lullaby.
21 responses to “‘Elevation,”
Wow jojo, it’s beautiful ❤️. Last line most definitely my favourite line. However the entire piece is amazing, subtle, pure and peaceful. ‘therefore a wonder hidden in one raindrop flows through my heart as I fly ❤️❤️, perfect. Wonderfully expressed and written. 🙂🌹
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Wow… Thank you so much, Amirah!!!❤️ I’m Glad you liked it 🤭 truly appreciate your time to read my work!! ❤️❤️
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The last line is my favorite too! Second favorite: a wonder hidden in one raindrop.
Wow, JoJo!
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Thank you so much, Ben!!! Truly appreciate it!❤️🙏🏽
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Agreed Ben ❤️
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Your very welcome, my pleasure 😊
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🤭❤️🙏🏽
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“hear the mountains ECHO within the looming sky” and “A walk to draw one’s path”
They both are perfect war cry.
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Once again you see the beauty in my work! And for that I’m thankful! 😊🤭
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Beautify, you did. Like the character, you beautify the world.
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Thank you so much, solennerias!! Thank you for your time and lovely comment 🤭🙏🏽 truly appreciate it!!!
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If we take the time to make each other’s day, we can usher in more days so bright.
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Amen to that, Selonnerias ❤️🙏🏽
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Wow this is amazing! Keep writing! I’m new here and was wondering if you guys could check out my page I would really appreciate it! Have a nice day! caleecreates.wordpress.com
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And this work of your’s my friend has stuck with my soul, i really love this poetry, i came back to this one and read it so many times 💖👍🏻💝
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Omg thank you so much for that amazing compliment 🤭❤️ I’m so glad you love my work 🤭 I feel blessed and honoured ❤️☺️🤗
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Pleasure is all mine… it is really soothing to mind and soul!!! Keep it up 👍🏻❤💝💝❤ looking forward to see more and more of these work of art😍😍❤👍🏻💖
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I Will definitely do that! Thank you so much for your support and time 😊❤️ you have made me smile, and that’s the most precious thing you could do to me😊❤️🤗
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🙈❤💝👍🏻🤗🤗
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“A wonder hidden in one raindrop
flows through my heart as I fly.
To have a journey,
as I follow,
I shall not forget my battles cry.”
Every time you kill me by using your words so poignantly Jojo sir. I’d love to say 3000 times that I love your poems 3000 × infinity😭❤❤❤
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😭😭❤️❤️❤️😍😍 gosh, truly speechless over here!!! Thank you so much, Pruuu ❤️
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