Feel me as I reach out my hands
only for you to hold.
As love beholds my heart
where dreams show me the stars
beyond the dark blue skies.
To whittle of despair, we speak of beauty.
In such delight we move during the night,
whereas we follow the light
we conceal none bright.
To linger with my fingers
I feel your warmth holding me.
To embrace my thoughts
I do not feel my emotions; you see?
“Will you follow me?” I ask myself…
Do you trust my path as I plea?
Let me show you the world
as you swim free
with the sea.
JJ-stache 
15 responses to “‘Forlorn,”
Very, very sweet. I see you like the word ‘whittle’ 🙂
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Thank you so much, Ben!! Hahaha yeah busted. Every now and then I have a favourite word 🙈
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you’re allowed to! 😀
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Romantic 😍
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Hihihih thank you so much, Jessica 🙈🤭
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😁😁😁
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Aww you never cease to amaze….. Beautifully portrayed. Really beautiful piece, it gives a comforting feeling. Love it ❤️❤️🌹🌹😊😊
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Yaaaaaay, Amirah loves my work once again 🤭🤭😍😍❤️❤️ I’m glad you loved it!!! JJ STACHE is doing a little dance right now🤭🙈
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Beautifully written ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Whoops, almost missed this one thanks to spam, but thank you so much, asthaisha!!! I truly appreciate it ❤️🙏🏽
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Loving this
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Thank you so much, brother ❤️🙏🏽
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Well adding it to my favourites. But this typical poem of yours if like have just took my heart, like I’m feeling I should gift this piece work to my boyfriend, but fortunately I don’t have not unfortunate haha but if I’d get to meet Nick Jonas I’ll gift him, haan but would tell him you’ve wrote don’t worry😌😂😭❤❤❤❤
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Hahaha, Nick Jonas is waiting for you! 😏 You never know! Can’t wait for you to share my work with him😜😂❤️❤️ yet I’m thankful to Have you as a supporter!!
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I wish I could gift him!! 😂😭❤
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