Part 2

Let me catch you

while I reach out my hand,

as they taught us

about the beauty within the promise land.

I Seek for validation in you

with an eye away.

To withhold me from sinner’s rose

I speak of no devil’s sway.

Let us melt into one

prayer of hymn. While I seek

for my words,

the unspoken thoughts,

they keep me away from dawn.

To share hope of light

with mother’s delight, we speak of no black swan.

Hear me,

Oh’ let me be spoken loud,

As they have fought

they will conquer us proud.

Part 1

Part 3 (To be continued)

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16 thoughts on “‘immanent,

  1. It took me a lot of time to reach towards the end. WHY? Because I was rereading the opening lines in a loop ❤ – just one more time, oh it’s beautiful ❤, once more, okay this is last time, how about again …
    “While I seek for my words, the unspoken thoughts, they keep me away from dawn.”
    I am waiting what “dawn” gonna do next!

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    1. Goddamit, Nebula 🙈🙈 you make me “blush” by your comments!! How am I supposed to respond to all of this!! 😍

      You know what, F it. I’m Just blessed by you! I’m speechless, that’s all I can say!❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽

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    1. That’s means so much to me, dear ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽 wooooww….. You always get me to smile from within my heart to my face ❤️ Thank you for that!!! Part 3 will be up soon!! 🤫🤫🤭

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