I Close my eyes at night
to open my heart for you to see.
“Nightmares” the misery of all
as I have one wish; one’s heart to be free.
Truthfully I share you my screaming memory.
To have strength,
to have will,
to open my soul with your missing key.
From wishing to believing
I slowly reach out with my hands to your face
as the waves hold the sea.
.
.
.
I Open my eyes in the morning
to an empty bed without thee.
My soul lost hope,
my heart rate slows down,
as I drop a tear for how it has to be….
A memory,
A fiction,
An imagination,
honesty, this was my plea.
32 responses to “‘Shiver,”
What a magic you create with your pen ❤️😍
LikeLiked by 3 people
Hihihih thank you so much, K🤭🙏🏽 that’s so lovely of you to say ❤️🥰
LikeLiked by 2 people
You’re welcome ❤️
LikeLiked by 2 people
Well penned👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much, Soni 😊🤗 thanks for your time to read my work ❤️ I truly appreciate it 🙏🏽❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
JoJo, ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….
💔💔
Let the tears wet your cheek
They’ll carry away all the bleak
As the sky holds the moon
May Hope clasp your soul soon
Your open heart, why didn’t she see?
I hope you find your missing key.
LikeLiked by 4 people
Omg Nebula, this is so beautiful ❤️❤️ Thank you so much for your kind words and this Lovely little poem!!
You have suprised me with the most amazing compliment/respond ever!! Hihi I Grant you a thousand thank you from my deepest heart!!❤️🤗🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
How enchanting ✨ you have a way with words
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hihihih I’m glad you liked it, Hannah 🤭🤗 thank you so much ❤️🥰
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are most welcome, it’s a pleasure to be able to read your work 💫✨
LikeLiked by 2 people
And that to me means allot🤗🙏🏽❤️ I’m glad you like to read my work ❤️🙈
LikeLiked by 2 people
Aww of course! 🤗🥰
LikeLiked by 2 people
Very beautiful Jojo. Reminds me of the lady of shalott. 💘💘🎶🌀🙏💛
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hihihih thank you so much, Lia 🤭❤️ that’s an huge compliment 😳🙈🤭❤️ too kind of you to say 🙏🏽🤭❤️😍🌞
LikeLiked by 1 person
😃🙏🥰😚🎶💛
LikeLiked by 1 person
Magical…. I’m lost in your words. Your amazing. 🌹
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aahww thank you so much for the love❤️🙏🏽 truly appreciate it 😊🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
I enjoyed this write-up! Quite brilliant. Loved the third line and the line, “as the waves hold the sea.” That was amazing. Keep it up! 💙😊
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hihihih thank you so much, J🙈🤭 glad you liked it 😊🙏🏽 “as the waves hold the sea” was my favourite part as well 🤫😳
LikeLiked by 2 people
Beautifully penned!🥰
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hihihih thank you so much, dear!! Glad you loved it ❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure! Hehe🤗☺️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
All posts are super.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much ❤️❤️ I’m glad you liked it so much!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
welcome
LikeLiked by 2 people
I am moved. The realisation of the morning is so touching.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Aahwww thank you so much 🤭🤭❤️❤️ glad you feel like this!!
LikeLiked by 2 people
I am glad that I stumbled upon your blog. Will keep returning.🤎🤎
LikeLiked by 2 people
I’m glad you truly like my work!! I feel honoured and blessed by that thought!! Thanks in advance for all the love 🤭❤️🙏🏽
LikeLike
🙏🙏
LikeLiked by 1 person
“I Close my eyes at night
to open my heart for you to see.”
Again adding it to my favourites Jojo sir 😭❤❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hihihih another one in your favourites ❤️🙏🏽😍
LikeLiked by 1 person