Mother, do you feel me?
I’m afraid to wander through life alone.
To have none by my side,
To…
have…
none…. whom holds me by night!
Moments of despair;
“I seek for care in your arms around me”
Hold me tight and never let me fall.
Mother, do you hear me?
I cry to forget our separate paths of all.
For I’m losing my mind,
Closing my eyes,
And going throughout life blind.
Father, do you see me?
Because I’m fighting this battlefield.
Scars breaking me down,
Blood streaming on the floor,
waiting… to be healed.
To fly or to yield?
Of these questions I occurred my behaviour.
To be stronger than pain.
To…
Be…
Stronger…. For my saviour!
37 responses to “‘profound,”
Moving words deeply heart felt poetry, Jojo.
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Suzette, thank you so much ❤️ I’m glad you liked it. 🤗🤗
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Pleasure.😊
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Such heart felt words. So beautifully written
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Thank you so much, dessertflower ❤️❤️ always appreciate your comment/feedback 😊
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So much of beauty and depth in every line…! This is too good 😍 beautifully penned! ❤️
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K, I’m so happy to know that you loved it so much. Thank you ❤️ i did my best 🙈🙈
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It’s great JoJo! ❤️😍
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Thank you, K 😍❤️
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I loved this poem, I really loved the feeling ❤
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OEHHHH, I CAN FINALLY READ YOUR ANSWERS!!! 😍😍😍 BRB, K! And ps, you truly deserve it❤️❤️🤗
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Such heartfelt words! So beautifully written!!
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Nawazich, thanks again for talking your time to read my work ❤️ I’m glad you loved it☺️
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My pleasure Jo!
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Omg, you are the first one who called me “Jo” on WP. I love it. Everyone I know calls me Jo, so I’m glad you do it as well😊 it’s all fine by me
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I was worried I might have offended you!! I am cool by it now!!😅😅
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Ahahha, I’m not easily offended 😂😂 it’s all fine. Don’t Worry 😂😏
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So beautiful and pure!👌❤
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Shreya, thank you so much. I’m glad you loved it 🤗❤️ thank you for your time to read my work!! Have a lovely weekend ❤️
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I felt the longing in each sentence. You have a great way with words!
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Rishika, thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️ I do my best 🙈 I appreciate you taking the time to read my work 😊
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Mother 🌈
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Thank you so much, Aleesha 💓💓
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Wonderful 👍
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THANK YOU SO MUCH, Subrata💓💓
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the images u tag are out of the box😍
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I try my best, jimmy. Thank you so much 😊
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Powerful and emotional…The photo conjures up your words perfectly!
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Thank you so much, Karina🤗 I’m glad you liked it ☺️ I truly appreciate it ☺️
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I don’t know how I ended up here, but I did. It gave me goosebumps. The way it started, it made me hold my breath until I didn’t reach the end. Fantastic. Wow Jojo.
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Hahaha, that’s a good question Indeed, Nebula 👀👀 tell me, were you stalking me again🤓😏 hahaha just kidding. I’m glad this poem gave you goosebumps!!! When I had to check the post I started to feel the emotions again when I wrote this one🥺🥺❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
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Your poem captured them perfectly ❣️
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A very powerful poem. Thank you
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And thank you so much for reading my work 😊🙏🏽 truly appreciate it!!!
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It was so perfect tone of words, each word relates to the next and also to the next days of an small kid who wonders how I would be doing this or that the next with my own self!!!!!! You are fabulous poet as usual I say❤
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I’m always grateful for your support and love ❤️❤️
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