Let us begin with a story to tell;
A whisperer from hell.
Nor scavenger of smell, for death of
Greed speaks to my spell. “you” the
Universe of our existence took my heart.
Oh’ mother, speaker of truth – Be the
Ruler of my muse, for I’m lost in your sooth.
Only for the brave shall I open my grave
For I am a merely slave of the human race.
“Who follows the ocean’s wave?”
Death has spoken to me,
Envy was my nemesis to be.
At sea I find my peace, only for you to see.
To you I say goodbye, only to start
Hoping for a new beginning, for thee.
34 responses to “‘languor,”
Creatively written and intriguing. Brilliant job! 😊
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Well thank you, J. Thanks for the feedback. It always helps me to improve my work! I’m glad you liked it ❤️❤️
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This is just too good to not read more than once! Outstanding!
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Dammit, john. Take you so much for that amazing compliment 😍 i feel so flabbergasted! I’m so glad you liked it ❤️❤️😊 thank you, thank you, thank you!
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I was thinking the same!!! such a great piece!
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Thank you so much, Bella ☺️😍
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Thank you for sharing your writing ✍ 😊
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And thank you so much for liking my work every time. I’m glad you always support me. Thanks to people like you I always want to share more of my writings ❤️
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Wish I could be a writer …but…I am a reader.
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Don’t say that about yourself, country Trek. I mean have you ever really tried writing? Because aren’t we all a symphony of words ready to conquer the world. Aren’t we here to inspire, and to reach the highest of emotions?
We all can write, but we just have to find our words that we can share. It took me a while to figure out my words, so why wouldn’t you be able to do the same?
Only way to find out is just to try, to fall and eventually to arise, and rise, into your own symphony of words!
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Thank you ……I will follow this idea and not be critical of my writing….
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That’s the spirit, country trek. I would be interested if you ever would like to share your writings. Writer to writer, helping one another! Take care and have a lovely week ahead ❤️
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Thanks
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Beautiful 😍 loved it ❤️
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Thank you so much, K 😊🙏🏽 I’m so glad you loved it ❤️❤️
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Beautiful! 💙
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Thank you so much, unique. I’m glad you like it ☺️😊
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I love it! It’s so beautiful. 💙
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Hihih, thank you so much.❤️🙏🏽 May you have a blessed week!
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This was absolutely heart-rending Jojo. Beautifully constructed and strong feelings… I related to it somehow and it felt painful to read… but yes, beautiful as always. This image too! Lends a kind of innocence even though the muse feels somehow malevolent in the piece. I suppose that’s just like nature. Kudos 💔💘💗🙏 🌊
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You are blessed with the most amazing soul a human being could ever wish for, Lia. You know, in one way I’m glad you could relate to it. Because that means I really touched a human soul, but at the same time i kinda hate it that you could relate to it. If you know what i mean? Of course you do, you always do! 😅❤️
But thank you so much for being so grateful for my writing and work. You have been really a support for my work, and i think also to the rest of wp community! ❤️❤️❤️
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Aw Jojo…. I really get what you mean about kinda hating that I could relate to it, and I have to say that I love that you kinda hate it, that means a lot to me and I hope you get what I mean by that haha… but truly. ❤️ I couldn’t comment last night because of my mood lol but wow you just broke my heart and healed it in the same breath, it feels hugged right now. You are so amazingly kind to me and others around here and all those things you just said apply to you dear friend. You’re such a wonderful fellow creator and I feel so grateful you somehow stumbled upon my blog. Hugs 🤗😍❤️☀️✨💛
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You got my words,
You got me speechless,
You got me flabbergasted by the symphony of being lost. Dammit, lia. Btw, I know what you mean. Hahah. And those mood swings we have sometimes, it does help for reaching down to your emotions. And that helps for writing. So kinda win win, right? Lol 😂 but, mostly I’m glad for the reason that you somehow feel better today, and that your heart feels hugged right now. You deserve all the best of love❤️ i just know you by the words you have shared with us, but you have shared enough emotions to get to know you a little more everyday!! ❤️❤️❤️☺️☺️
Ps. I’m glad i stumbled upon your blog, and that you started to return the favors!
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🥰🥰🙏🙏❤️ Just a quick reply here — at first your poetry scared me haha but when I realized from comment-chats that you don’t actually bite I began to adore reading it! 😉😆😚😂💗 Write on Jojo. As you like to say, keep inspiring. :)) 🌷💕😊
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Ahhaha seriously? I didn’t know that 😂😂 no hard feelings though 😂❤️ just funny to know. I’m glad you gave me a chance, And yeas i will, Lia. To write and to inspire ☺️☺️❤️❤️
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I am way too sensitive it’s bizarre. 😆 I think it was the images mainly, some black blood and things like that. 😂😂😆 hugs. 😁
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Hahaha ahh, yeah. Those picture. I get it. Well you shouldn’t be afraid for my tomorrow’s writing. Tomorrow it’s about “love”. Hugs
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Hurray for that and till tomorrow then. ;)) 🎉
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Till tomorrow, lia. 😜
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This is so deep and moving!
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Thank you, thank you so much, Bella. I really appreciate it ☺️☺️
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New beginnings are good….
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Yes they definitely are. New beginnings give you hope and desire to accomplish great things! 😊❤️
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Yup…. You are right….
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