“Therefore, the art of composing
of a reality in a rose.”
For I am a whisperer of tongue,
scared and young.
To shout the truth,
concur nevertheless of screaming youth.
“Arise” – I spoke, “Arise, and stand your right.”
I Am who
I was to be,
“scared”
and young to see.
I Am risen
and spoken free.
By the thought of men,
whispering words of “Amen.”
To ask for forgiveness,
shoreless in search for the time of when.
30 responses to “‘Discomfiture,”
Wonderfully expressed!
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Thank you so much, singhpiyush ☺️🙏🏽
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“…and spoken free” Nice work. Very nice work.
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Thank you so much for the compliment, brockelman ☺️🙏🏽 I’m glad you liked it
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Wonderful and captivating!
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Thank you so much, Shanyu 🙏🏽☺️
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You are always welcome. Peace!
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Nice one!
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Thank you so much, Masercot! 😊
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Wonderful work Jojo Al-waealy 🤓☺️ smiles Hedy
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Thank you so much, Hedy☺️🤗
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This image is really interesting with this. It changes the expected perspective somewhat. Always love that you have this signature style Jojo ❤︎❤︎
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Thank you so much, Lia. I’m glad you noticed that. I did try to make a difference between the picture and the words and yet connect with one another! Especially glad for naming it my “signature” style 😊😊 thanks for the amazing compliment, Lia❤️
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Wonderfully written! It was interesting
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Thank you so much, Nilesh😊 thank you for taking your time for reading my work ❤️
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Captivating! Some wonderfully written words in lines that really caught my thoughts. Brilliant write-up.
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Ahhww, thank you for the support, J. I’m glad you got Caught up with my work ❤️❤️
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My pleasure. I absolutely did get caught up. It is so much fun to read what other creative writers come up with. 💙
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True, it’s indeed fun to read other people their work. It also inspires me to try out new things, or subjects or whatever. 😊
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Oh, amen! Especially when people enjoy it and then it’s like a whole new door of imagination has been open down the hall of creativity. It’s exciting! 😅
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True true, J 🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️❤️
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Nice blog
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Thank you so much, saania. I’m glad you like my blog 😊😊
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Well done! I especially like this: “shoreless in search for the time of when.” It says so much.
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Thank you so much, magickmermaid. Im so glad you liked my work ❤️ especially with that line. I too loved it 🙈
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Melba ☺️☺️
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You are welcome!
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Yes, You are….
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Yes, I am… Thank you so much, Nabeela! Thank you for taking your time to read my work 😊❤️
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