They say I am a stray;
Walking down the street two-way path crossing my way. You have been caring all the weight away. For I have been the fighter of my own battles nearing my screaming day. “Attention” that’s what I seek for my inner child’s play. With a knot in my heart, with love given to rise your soul, you have been granting my heart for you to mislay.
They say she is not like the rest;
All I Can say; “I have been gods bless” for shouting the truth out of my chest. To be all obsessed I was leaving my mind unrest, but I did express my heart for you to undress!
They… They… They…
for I am careless and free. Happiness is my power key and undecided crossed the sea.
Loved this one !
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Thank you so much, Paul!!☺️☺️
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Wow man. You are talented. I adore this. You have written my heart out. I would like to reblog you work.
Regards dessert flower 🌸
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Omg, dessertflower. Thank you so much for that amazing compliment!!! I’m glad that you like it so much! ☺️☺️
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You can reblog my work if you would like that. That’s a compliment and I feel honoured!!!
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Good one….
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Thank you so much, Nabeela😊😊
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I absolutely adore your poetry. <>
My chest felt like it sprouted wings when I read that.
Also there is something I love about your punctuation and capitalization. It tickles me, linguistically.
Thanks Jojo, for sharing your awesome poetry. :)) 🙏🙏💛
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Ahhh lia, thank you so much for that amazing compliment 🙈😊 i really appreciate it!! I will keep on sharing my poetry💙but, you also have to keep writing!! ☺️
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Ah that is so kind!! I have been writing a lot… now I’m lost as to what to share of it. lol. Have to write a new one I guess. ;)) Thank you so much for the encouragement Jojo, it means a lot. 💙💙💛🌻🌀
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Hahah, i know that feeling, lia. Just write and don’t think. Start with one word. That’s helps when I have issues with writing! And always my pleasure☺️😊
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Hooked ❤️
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Thank you so much ☺️
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Sneaking your blog today
I stumbled upon your “They”
Your inner child play
Really took my breath away
Your words heavily weigh
And they just made my day
I wish I were also a stray
Then wouldn’t be this delay
I would be walking this way
JoJo, beautiful was “They”
But I have one little doubt, why did you write “caring all the weight away”?
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Hey Nebula, sorry your message got into my spam folder…
First things first and that’s is that I love your little tribute poem 😳😍 soo lovely and sweet! And yes, why did I do that. Simple, by caring about me, the weight that I was carrying simply left because of her caring. I forgot who I was, untill she showed me by caring for me!
I know I can’t say thank you, but yet I Will do it!! Thank you, Nebula 😊🤭
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Oh I see, got it. 😳😳Thanks😳😳
I think it recognised me and classified me as spam! 🙈🙈🙈Machines are intelligent!!!
It’s just that your one poem leads to another (“More” suggests your other poems), and I can’t help to click it – TITLE – they are so intriguing and then I have to stop to leave my words expressing the appreciation of a reader. 😊
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Hahahaha, the machines are taking over the world 😳 how dare they…. Hahaha ahww Thank you so much, I’m so glad you love my work 😳😍❤️ you are amazing 🤭
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