Blood on my hands,
Envy is my wish on demand.
And I had to fight those battles.
Unity brought us together, but scares
That was beneath my skin.
I am one pain away from the win.
From falling to rising sin. “have my soul
Under your control”. Pain shattering me down,
Love brought me here, wearing the crown!
Great🍀
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Thanks you so much! 😊
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Beautiful indeed
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Thank you so much, michnavs ☺️
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Very good idea to experiment with different forms of poetry; we learn so much from trying different things, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn’t. This works, well done, but keep experimenting!
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Thank you so much, Paul! Really appreciate it! I love every feedback that can help me improve my work! And you know that I love experiment different forms of writing! 😊 So, once again, thank you for the compliment!
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Wonderful poetry!
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Thank you so much😊
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Always welcome
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Some glowing thoughts… Lovely!
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Thank you so much.☺️
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Love! It all seems perfect..
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Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it!☺️
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