‘Beautiful,

Posted on by jojo alwaealy Posted in Lover & FighterTagged , , , , ,

Blood on my hands,

Envy is my wish on demand.

And I had to fight those battles.

Unity brought us together, but scares

That was beneath my skin.

I am one pain away from the win.

From falling to rising sin. “have my soul

Under your control”. Pain shattering me down,

Love brought me here, wearing the crown!

13 thoughts on “‘Beautiful,”

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    cyncoed says:

    Very good idea to experiment with different forms of poetry; we learn so much from trying different things, sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn’t. This works, well done, but keep experimenting!

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      jojo alwaealy says:

      Thank you so much, Paul! Really appreciate it! I love every feedback that can help me improve my work! And you know that I love experiment different forms of writing! 😊 So, once again, thank you for the compliment!

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