You said; “Love is young and we should
Only take it by the heartbeat.”
Us? that shall not happen nor bitter or sweet.
This path crossed by two-way street.
How could I ever trust thou pleat?
Free I will be, take my veins for you to see on repeat!
Uncover our lost heat. you said; “take my seat”
Love is what I do not need, because we are incomplete!
28 responses to “‘Youthful,”
True man
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Hi dessertflower, thanks for liking my poem again! I’m glad you can relate to it. ☺️
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Omg, that it beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Shreya😊
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much, Luisa ☺️
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❤
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You are such a wonderful writer Jojo, and I love the way you put words and text together, and your use of punctuation and boldface. You have a very signature and classy style. I love it! ❤︎❀🎶
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Speechless. That’s what I am…. I’m soo thankful for that amazing compliment, Lia. Thank you so much.. Gosh I really don’t know what to say!
You just made my day, my week and my year in one compliment!!!! “❤️☺️☺️
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Awwwwww thank you Jojo, for this lovely, lovely reply. You have got me smiling and beaming from my eyes. (But then, you always manage to do that somehow. :)) Looking forward to your next beautiful write. 🥰🤩🙏😊
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Hihihi both happy at this moment. That’s good news ❤️ I’m also looking forward to yours amazing writing.
Im posting my next one tonight (Europe time) don’t know where you from though! 😂🙈
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Yayyyyy for that. 🎉🙌😊 I’m in France, where are you? And how are you so organized btw lol. 😆
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Oehh nice, ma’am. The Dutch speaking living in French. I’m from the Netherlands. I just schedule my writing ahead. So whenever I write I schedule it for my usual days: Mondays, Wednesday, Thursday and Saturdays. Kinda a routine OCD I have 😂
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No way!!!! I didn’t know you were in the netherlands! Wat leuk zeg! Mijn moeder kwamt uit nederland. Maar ik was in Canada geboorte en opgrooied. (Mijn nederlands is dus en beetje slecht. ;))
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Ahhahaha. Nou je kan het nog best goed. Ik begrijp je in ieder geval! But always fun to meet a fellow person. Such a small world after all, right?
My parents are from Iraq, i was born in Jordan. 3 years old when we came to the Netherlands. So basically born and raised in the Netherlands!
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Wow that is so cool. My husband works in the Netherlands. I have a lot of cousins there. The dutch are a harsh and blunt people. 😂
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Ohww woow seriously, that’s amazing. And yeah, the Dutch are indeed harsh and blunt sometimes 😂😂 in what city does your hubbie work?
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He works near the airport. Yes but perhaps I am being to generalistic haha. 😂😂 It’s just the kind and quiet ones mostly are not as obvious. But they are many, just like everywhere in the world. :))
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Oehh nice, Lia. Hahaha true true. The world is a funny and weird place, but yet acceptable! 😏😂
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Definitely. And “love is all around us.” I love those blunt Dutchies. 😍🇳🇱😄
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“To all we love, to all we care. For we are all one soulless wanderer of mother earth.” keep it real, lia. Stay true to yourself! ❤️😊
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nicely penned
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Thank you so much, Ruchita! 😊
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welcome jojo
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Woah.. I really liked it! 😍❤️❤️
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Thank you so much, Shreya ☺️ I really appreciate it 🙏🏽❤️
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” Love is what I do not need, because we are incomplete! ”
Well this line is succha painful line na, like sometimes I feel all are in a way incomplete even though having anyone shrewed person beside us, sometimes it’s just all we need is to stay all way silent and someone to hold our hand saying ” Little charm, I’m here. Don’t worry, everything will be fine. ” Anyways Jojo sir, I can’t stop myself to praise you and your words!!
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Beautiful Said, Pruuu!! ❤️🙏🏽 Hihihih and I love the praise 😳
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