“I walk”, while I see my soul passing through,
You dance, while you skip my love to sew.
“I sit”, waiting for you to touch my soul,
You jump, waiting for you to gain control.
“I unite”, while my soul breaks at night,
You run, faster during daylight.
“I wait”, for our souls to be stronger,
You left, you and I are no longer!
You told me to walk away from everything we have seen. The sky has been clear, while I Sit, reaching out for you, my queen. We will “unite” that’s what you said; “don’t make a scene”. I promised I would wait, but I have been.
15 responses to “‘soul,”
True story Jojo? I love the way you punctuate the title as always, and the soul yearns for reuniting in the reading of this piece.
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Haha, you got me there, lia. Yes it’s a true story…. Actually all my poetry is based on something that happened in my life! 🙈
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Well it’s very poignant and I’m sure I’m not the only reader here feeling it! I love your style. It’s very “you.” 💛💛
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Thanks, lia. That means a lot to me! 💙💙 I do my best to show my truest emotions! I’m glad you always like what I do☺️ that motivates me every time!!
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You’re a very cheering and encouraging presence in the WP community, besides being a talented poet. Sending many hugs of appreciation. 🤗🐵🌻🐵🤗
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*blushing* for that amazing compliment. Thanks, lia. You are amazing yourself as well. Keep the spirit up and love going! 😊 Hugs and kisses to you 💙☺️
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Beautiful… I love the rhyme
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Thank you so much zamadlomo, I’m glad you like it! ☺️
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Definitely… Thanks for the great work 🌹
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And thank you for taking your time to read my work!💟🙏🏽
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The pleasure is all mine
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Lovely poetry
Stay safe and healthy
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Thank you so much😊 same to you, stay safe and healthy! 💙
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” You told me to walk away from everything we have seen. The sky has been clear, while I Sit, reaching out for you, my queen. We will “unite” that’s what you said; “don’t make a scene”. I promised I would wait, but I have been.”
God it’s too much heart breaking!! I just wish for your strength even if uh recovered!! You’re an amazing poet!! ❤
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My strength is in my words and I’m glad you can connect with it!!❤️🙏🏽
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