Once again I close my eyes,
take a deep breath
and remember your smell.
Where I wonder, as I forget,
if you remember me well?
“Everything will be alright.”
Words to comfort my heart
as I speak of our farewell.
One last breath,
One last sight
One last time to recall your spell.
.
Where I hear my song
the world opens my night.
As the stars luster under the clouds
the looming sky is like our daylight.
.
With our lost time;
we sought and we fought
as nothing adrift us away.
So feel the harm in our words
as our souls colours us grey.
Here I remember our smell
as I take a deep breath,
once again I close my eyes today.
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31 responses to “‘Adrift,”
That took me back to 1992 when I lost my 20-year partner to AIDS. It’s amazing how perfectly chosen words can—almost instantly—recreate the past. Thank you, Jojo.
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Hi, Stephen, I’m sorry to hear about your lost. Never fun to loose someone who’s dear to you. I’m glad my work could, in a way, connect with you. Always do my best to connect with one another throughout my work! Thanks for reading, Stephen! I know the feeling!
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Wow!!! This is beautiful❤❤
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Thank you so much, Shreya♥️😊 appreciate your time for reading my work!!
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Wow is all I can think to say.
Speechless…
How do you do it! You are incredible talented❤️
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Once again I thank you, barely a blog! Truly appreciate it! (Speechless 🤭😳) my fingers just do what my heart desires to sing ♥️ no really, don’t know what I have to say😳😳 I’m just blessed and thankful for that amazing compliment!!
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Of course! I shower you with more compliments to come, and yes you are very VERY blessed. I can’t wait to hear your heart sing again. 😊
xoxo
Brittany❤️🌻
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Hihi, the blushes keep coming 😳 I hope you will, once again, Love it♥️♥️🙏🏽🙏🏽
Take care of yourself, Brittany ♥️ you may call me jj or JoJo! Whatever you like😊
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Ahh, this is very beautuful❤
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Thank you so much, Joan!! Glad you liked it!! ♥️🙏🏽😊
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You’re incredibly talented. Beautiful words that reach the soul.
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Hihi thank you so much 🤭😳♥️ (speechless 🤭) truly appreciate your loving comment!!
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Hi Jo ( Mind if i call Jo😁) Loved this piece! You are so talented as said by others! the verses and picture just moved me till the end.
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Of course, you can! You totally should! I’m glad you loved my work! I do the best I can! 😊🤭(Speechless over here)😳♥️ always love your comments and support!!!!
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haha! ok your name is Jo then.!😁😊
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Yes indeed, but the real question is; how may I call you? 😳
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umm we are two actually. So you may call us Duo. But since I am one you can call me Kunjal! cus that is my name.
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AHH now I get it why it’s called “duo disseminators”, Kunjal. Well, I Love the name! Sounds like Indian? Or am I totally wrong 😅😳
Take care of (you two) yourself 🙏🏽♥️
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nope it is indian!
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Well done Jojo !!
I always just love the way you write !!!🖤🖤
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Thank you very much, snowflake!! Truly appreciate your loving comment and support!! I Just do my best 🤭♥️ glad you love my writings!!
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hi JoJo, I really like this one; beautifully written, and I feel the sadness after a breakup; I can relate to this —
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Hi John, how have you been, friend! I’m glad you really liked this one. Also because you could relate to it. I Love how words can connect with one another!! 🙏🏽♥️
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you’ve done well, JoJo; what did you think of my little poem? it’s on the same topic as yours 🙂
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Hi John, I very liked your “little poem” as well. Loved the strong ending. 😊♥️
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JoJo that comment should be in the comments column of my post where the other comments are —
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You are very right, John! I will take care of that!
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It’s wonderful felling with your words ❤
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I’m glad to hear that, pooja!! I do my best ♥️ thanks for the loving comment!! ♥️
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Very beautifully written 🤎
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Thank you so much for reading my work, Payne! Glad you liked it!! ♥️🙏🏽🤗
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